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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jone one question. If you had continued with Snape dying, would she have ended up with Remus?
I look forward to your next effort.
I look forward to your next effort.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
don\'t mind the reviewer hate me you wrote a lovely story even if i was vex when i read the chapter about severus killing himself but please don\'t let the opinions of others get you down if you do you will never get any way in the world there will always be someonat dat don\'t like what you write but don\'t let them get you down and for me please write an epoligue and if you need help with ideas please email and tell me.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad this ended happilly. I was half expecting Hermione to kill herself after being tormented by Severus\' ghost or something of the sort.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHY THE FUCK DID YOU LET SEVERUS KILL HIMSELF YOU ARE A HATEFULL LITTLE BITCH THIS STORY WAS GOOD UNTIL THEN HOPE YOU MAKE IT BACK UP WITH YOUR EPOLIGUE YOU BITCH WHY DONT YOU GO FUCK YOUR SELF BITCH BITCH FUCK YOU I HATE THIS FUCKING STORY NOW IT SUCKS.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story was great until you killed Severus.
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO, WHY????? PLEASE don\'t make me wait for the epilogue...... he can\'t be dead!!!!!!!!!! I\'m sitting here explaining to my 4 year old why I\'m crying:( They NEED each other!!! There are only 2 things that I\'ve ever known to cause a chill like that, 1. The 6th sense 2. The bond of 2 hearts. It reminds me of how a mom can just \"know\" when something happens to one of her children. Please let me feel better before tomorrow!!!!!!!!!! Deb >^..^<
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Tanya, Still feeling the knot in my stomach, but wanted to leave a note of a more positive nature*
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You murdered my poor darling Severus.......... :( Please update tonight and save him.....sniff...sniff.....
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the chills were from... severus\' ghost?
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*stands and applauds* Well done for making everyone squirm. I must admit when I read the chapter before the epilogue I thought you had lost your mind. Even though you had described in some measure the pain Sev was feeling because of his previous actions, having him kill himself had come from nowhere. Had you not made the entire scene a dream, I hate to say it, but you would have lost your story line integrity completely. There is an art to causing anguish amongst readers, and had you set the story up more appropriately, then yes, Sev\'s suicide would have been an acceptable thing. You achieved more by redeming this is in the end. I was most pleased with the finale.
Please do not think this is a flame...I don\'t do those..I prefer to not review than flame authors...I am merely giving you the point of view of someone who has enjoyed your work, and someone who does write dark fics full of delightful anguish.
I look forward to reading anything you have to offer in the future.
Much respect...
Shem xxx
Please do not think this is a flame...I don\'t do those..I prefer to not review than flame authors...I am merely giving you the point of view of someone who has enjoyed your work, and someone who does write dark fics full of delightful anguish.
I look forward to reading anything you have to offer in the future.
Much respect...
Shem xxx