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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I liked it with either ending.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story has potential, I won\'t deny you that, but the conversations are too...formal. Also, you need to get a beta, if you don\'t already
have one, because this story really needs to be spell checked and looked over for possible incompletes, etc. I have noticed a few..odd
misspelled words in the first chapter that really need to be fixed. Feel free to email me at any time, I\'ll be happy to discuss my views
and such with you.
have one, because this story really needs to be spell checked and looked over for possible incompletes, etc. I have noticed a few..odd
misspelled words in the first chapter that really need to be fixed. Feel free to email me at any time, I\'ll be happy to discuss my views
and such with you.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
where\'s snape in all this?
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It made me cry and smile. You are a wonderful aurthor.
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August 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* shame on you for messin with my head like that! I was so sad when he died...I was like woah..lol It was good though. Well, no, not good. GREAT!
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November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I loved the Epilouge. I can\'t wait to read the sequel. I bet it will be just as great as this one was. I loved this story.
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this was truly a kick-ass story. you did a great job with this. i\'m glad malfoy got what was coming to him. poor hermie, though. she went thru hell. as for that dream, i wasn\'t too keen with him dying. :P i\'m glad it was just a dream!
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aaaarghh....good story but i guess my mind is twisted too cause i liked the original ending better...look forward to the sequel