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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is an absolutley beautiful insight into Severus\' inner world... I anxiously await the next update...
I am glad you have given someone like Brendan to Sev...He deserves it..
Shem xxx
I am glad you have given someone like Brendan to Sev...He deserves it..
Shem xxx
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If I haven\'t already said it... I\'m saying it now...
MORE please.
MORE please.
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i was most entranced in the story,enen though it had no sex in it.i hope you update real soon.
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*lets out a breath she had been holding for a long time* holy s*** that was incredible. dumbledore being that malicious towards snape was certainly a nice touch and quite original. the best stories feature the old man as not so omniscient as jk wants us to think. i certainly can\'t wait for the next installment, and i do so adore the tangled webs you have woven here. :) and all the children snape has saved... well, i\'m sure that only makes him all the more attractive in wiktt women\'s eyes.
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
waiting with bated breath for next chapter. And the chapter after that, and the one after that.
damn impressive story you got there. Please continue... soon!
damn impressive story you got there. Please continue... soon!
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October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the first review I have ever written, I am usually content just reading. But I have been reading this story and have become so deeply involved in the originality of the story line that I find myself wanting to read the next chapter. Since it has not been updated in quite a whileind ind myself at the edge of my seat, hoping and now I am begging for the next chapter to be updated. Please, please, please don\'t leave me hanging any longer!!! I am most definitely addicted to this story. Please update.....????
thanks,
severusluv
thanks,
severusluv
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October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey!!!!!! I like the plot!!!!!!!! i like the way you write! I couldv\'e reviewed sooner but i just had no time! im patiently waiting for the next update! :D
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October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORE! This is an amazing story, really.
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October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m hooked. I loved your description of the elf ritual in the latest chapter. I\'m also fascinated by how Severus saves those children. Poor Brandan, he does alot as Severus\' homme des affaires. I look forward to reading more chapters.
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October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I found and read this yesterday and can\'t wait for the next chapters. I am very impressed with the way you have handled everything, including the dark stuff. I found myself so caught up in things that when it came to an end, I was very impatient to continue. Yours is definitely one of the more enjoyable, and believable, fics I\'ve read (most times I don\'t even leave comments). Please do continue this. I\'d like to find out where it\'s going. All the best,
Pixie
Pixie