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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Moody pulling one over on Dumbledore, that was great! I didn\'t expect that to happen!
This story has been very original, so keep up the good work ;)
This story has been very original, so keep up the good work ;)
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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t usually review individual chapters. I wait until I read the total story the author has posted. This is an excellent story. You have brought in a lot of very different threads to this story. I particularly enjoyed the encounter between Jaidy, Sirius and Mrs. Norris. Keep going please. I need to know what Alastor and Severus talk about. Good story. I like Brendan. Knowing his back story would be interesting. Maybe another story about him?
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this fic... please keep writing!!!
I have nothing else to say...which is good in this case...
Keep up the good work!
I have nothing else to say...which is good in this case...
Keep up the good work!
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December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was so glad to find out that this fic wasn\'t abandoned; I love the way you have so many different things going on. Making Snape a Priest of the Lady was an interesting twist I wasn\'t expecting. I look forward to your next update!
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December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter... I\'m loving Brandon more and more (hitting Sirius with a cauldron, and being disappointed because he couldn\'t do it again before the house elf arrived - hehe!). Update as soon as you can!
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November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
excellent story!! please, more soon!
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November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is absolutely brilliant. You have managed to be original (a true feat in fanfiction) and introduce original characters that one cares about. I am anxiously awaiting more updates of this wonderful tale!!
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November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
once again, another beautiful chapter. just from being a woman, i\'ve never found anything... pure... about my menstruel cycle, but i do love the way you incorporated it here. the old magics, the statue, and of course, snape being described as rather muscular (a girl could get used to this). :) i certainly look forward to more clueless albus and clever brenden. and without really needing to say it- muscular snape.
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November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this fic is so awesome! now are severus and hermione going to become romantically invovled. i won\'t find out for a while will i. i have a feeling that this is gong to be a long fic. am i right?
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November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter! I will confess to a certain confusion at times (which to me, only inspires me to read more), but I cannot wait to see your next installment.