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I am enjoying this immensely and can hardly wait for the update. Snape is delicious! And what a wonderful blending of old magics.

Come on... WRITE! I\'m waiting....

Waugh! That\'s it? *sigh* I hereby invoke the charm of reviewing that garners more story! You plot beautifully. I love the interwoven points of view. Sometimes it seems too jumpy, though. Oh, and just a mention - spellcheck is not your friend. I started reading at the beginning, and can certainly see a difference, so keep improving your re-reading (and cozening your beta) and it\'ll keep improving! Don\'t get me wrong, it\'s a very enjoyable read! I want more!
Goddess Bless!

I\'m really enjoying this fic. Very dark. Very interesting.

I\'ll look forward to the next update :)

S xx

I have read the first 6 chapters and I must say I am quite taken by this. A Very interesting yarn you are unraveling... or is it raveling?

Either way... I go back for more... very dark. Very nice.

Prologue - chapter 12.... I have just finished up to this point in your story & am very much hoping that there will be maddeadded soon!!! This story is different from anything that I\'ve read & it is ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE!!! I LOVE your Severus (I always have believed that he had a heart that would make the oceans look small!!!) & the rest of the characters are FABULOUS!!! I was kind of hoping to get to see Sirius get obliviated OR at least see him hunt the manor for Hermione which would have put him in the position of knowing that his hated enemyn|gt don done what he is being accused of!!! That would have really bitten him on his backside!!!

I am hoping that things will get a bit easier for Severus as well as Hermione!!! I am also hoping that Draco will go to Albus & seek his help!!! Was Lucius upset by Voldy\'s treatment of his son? Will he do anything about it?

I can\'t wait to see wSeveSeverus has to say to Moody, should prove quite interesting!!! I am also looking forward to how Hermione reacts toward Brendan & will be interested to see how she acts toward Severus when she sees him next!!! Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^<

Whoa, Moody, sneaky, aren\'t you? :) Very interesting so far, I\'d like to know how Severus manages to outmaneuver both sides. Thanks to better half for helping you clean, cook & write; especially the latter. ;)

I am really enjoying reading this, especially the last chapter. That was some very clever questioning, allowing him to tell virtually the truth without committing himself. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.

A cliffhanger... . Loved the chapter, especially the interrogation scene. Very well done. The Mrs. Norris \"fight\" was also fun ;). Can\'t wait for an update!

Damn, Damn, Damn. Just found your story, Brothers and read the Prologue through Chapter 12, straight through. I could not stop, it was so good.

The slight AU with Sirius still being alive, I do not mind. The only thing that I do mind is that you are only to chapter 12. I want more. Please post more soon. I am bookmarking your story right now.

There is a lot of badly written stories out there, fortunately, in a lot of cases they are early efforts. The problem is finding the pearls. Now that I have found this one, you will not be rid of me.

Keep up the good work.

Lovely! I just found this, and I like it very much. Different from what I expected from the summary. I am curious how it will end.