rate_review Reviews

Great to see an update to this story. It is very interesting so far and I like that you have a very strong and fairly original backing for the plot.

Keep up the good work.

`feeds the author`

more, more, more!!!!

I loved it! Every single solitary word of it! I\'ve just managed to read it all (long, though immensely enjoyable, task that it was) and that is all I can say! You had me doubted Severus\' intentions back in the first few chapters, but all was redeemed, and I am happy! <) I eagerly await more of this story from you!

More, more, more! I thought you\'d given up. I\'m so glad you haven\'t. So far, this story has blown me away, but in a good sense. The scope is much wider than many stories here, and very likely covering a longer period of time (both in the writing and as the action goes). I see you\'ve begun posting it at L&LS. Good. I like to check both sites frequently, usually when I get home from work. I find myself at the edge of my seat, so I\'ll have to beg you for more. See, I\'ve bitten my nails to the quick just re-reading it. You\'re very good. Keep up the good work. There are some stories whose title you don\'t have to say, now what was that story about. This is one of them. I like the way the characters are fitting together. I think the reactions are very credible (good job! many cannot do that). The dark parts, yes, they\'re dark but there are also warnings. I find that to cut things out you miss the intensity of the story. I myself may skip a paragraph if it gets too detailed and my stomach says \"nope, that\'s it; move on\" and so I do. But the warnings help. and in the real world there are probably even worse things that go on out of sight. I can find no fault whatsoever with your story; I JUST WANT MORE. Thanks!

many hugs,

Judy

Very nice, i hope you update soon! I like how you blend the HP magic with a more i-dont-know magic.

That was an intriguing and disturbing story so far. I like how you have made the plot so thick and interesting. keep up the good work. ~_^

Your Plot is unreal.This was a bang up job. Hurry Hurry I\'m waiting!!!


Trio

I\'ve been waiting for awhile for an update, and you certainly didn\'t disappoint! :) I\'m glad he told Moody what he did, and didn\'t completely keep it to himself and try to cover his tracks! Hmm, so many questions :) Sending some caffeine to your MUSE to keep it going for the next chapter :)

Well, Good God girlfriend, you certainly know how to pull one\'s heart from their chest.

Most excellent update and one FINE cliffie!

Now for the fangrrl stuff...

MORE! NOW!!!!!!

I\'ve been checking frequy toy to see if you had updated, and today I checked and you had! Oh the yayness of it all. I love your stories and I like your writing style, although I\'m getting angry at your cliff hangers. I want to know what happens!!! Please update soon, pretty, pretty please!
From your devoted reading slave,
iola_Tee Tee Hee