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for The Sound Of Silence

by LacyC

person Polly
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! The story is very very impressive! When are you going to update this story?? Do it now please.
person Gabi
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! It was very deep, the the erotic parts were detail, but subtle, and nossy.ssy. It showed love, rather than kinkyness. The story itself is rather intruiging. I hope Stephanie regains her voice soon...
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 was FANTASTIC!!! You really allowed us to see a different side of Hermione, where her strength was lost for a time. She had lost her will & needed help to get it back..... Thank You Albus for putting Severus up to the task!!!

I think that it is wise to take things a bit slow with them, not a snail\'s pace mind you, but not so fast that it causes more harm than good!!! They seem to be falling into each other a little at a time & I think their daughter will allow the process to happen quicker, but will be accepted because I think they want to be together!!!

I really do hope that you will do well on your exams & am REALLY looking forward to chapter 14!!! Deb >^..^<
person Ventrue66
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. Nice and long and informative. I like to know a little more about how they ended up together. I can\'t wait to read more.
person Travelgirl
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I am reading the story since you started posting it, and am always awaiting the next chapter!
Your story is nice! I hope you continue soon.
Regards
person Barrie
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I used to write and draw in class as well. The trick is to look up at your teachers regularly with a look of concentration and then get back to writing, makes them think you are taking notes. : ) Listen to portions of th electure and raise your hand to answer one or two questions, you look like you are participating that way. I can actually split my focus and pay attention to both, but that\'s not something everyone can do.

I liked the flashback. I hope Severus pulls his head a little farther out of his a** soon. He is being rather silly. ermione is figuring it out finally, YAY! Go story, go story, go story!

Friendlyquark
person nesscafe
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, that last chapter was an eye opener. Thanks for the flashback. I was wondering when we would get a little peak inside how they got together in the first place! Looking forward to the next chapter!
person franflutewitch
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!!! The making sleep Steph was so intense for me than for Hermione and Snape. I like your writing, and hope this time you\'ll be able to update very, very soon...
person Estrilda
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow - I just found this story already at Chapter 12. What an innovative and lovely story. I can\'t wait for the next update. Please do it soon.
person SandraM
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, NOW I\'ve fallen in love. Cna\'t wait for the next chapter.