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so girl wheres the sequel!

I hate to sound impatient but I am! I really want to read what happens next. Dose he visit New York?? Come on I

OHhh i loved it you said there will be a sequle?? ohh please when where how whats it called... i just fell in love with steph.. ive read the story twice the first time i stayed up all night to finish it. anyway please let me know when your going to do more f yof you had what is it called and where did you post.. I LOVE STEPH daughter of SNAPE!!! thanks bree

Chapter 20... I have so very much enjoyed this story & am really looking forward to the sequel!!! I can\'t wait to see how things go when Steph & Hermione return & am very interested to see all of the sneeking that will be going on to get Severus & Hermione back together!!!

Could you PLEASE email me when you have posted the 1st chapter of your sequel?!? I will be watching for it, but I really don\'t want to miss it!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<

Great story! Last chapter sad but looking forward to the sequel. Can\'t wait, more soon please.

Chapter 19... I can only imagine how much Hermione & Steph will miss Severus & vice-versa!!! I am hoping that their will be some sort of admission of feelings before they leave!!! Can\'t wait to see how their departure goes!!! Til chapter 20, Deb >^..^<

Great chapter! I am really enjoying your story, and I look forward to your updates!

I just wanted to point out a couple mistakes that I found:

\"Thank you for letter her work to earn Christmas money.\"
Shouldn\'t the word \'letter\' be letting?

...simply gasp this in your hand and think of me.
She smiled and gasped the gem.
forgot the \'r\' in grasp

Yeay! Great job! Can\'t wait for more. ;o)

aw, wonderful. Contiune?

Chapter 18... It seems that Severus & Hermione both really want the same thing & have done a little to show it, but it would be nice if one or both of them would just speak their mind!!! I don\'t expect them to just fall all over each other, but it would be nice to see them really express what they are feeling!!!

I am glad to see that Steph was able to convince Hermione about the money, hope she can smooth things over with Ron & Harry about it!!! They both did what they thought was right & what they wanted to do for her, she just let her pride get in the way!!!

I am looking forwardseeiseeing how things go at the party & am hoping that one of them will take that 1st BIG step soon!!! Til chapter 19, Deb >^..^<

I like your story very much, so update soon again!

Chapter 17... I do wish that Hermione would take things for what they are & stop being so damned stuborn & independent!!! I think that she has done a FABULOUS job with her daughter, but friends do things for each other & her friends want to do for her, not to mention that she deserves some of what R Har Harry are trying to give her!!! I do hope that she realizes that if they didn\'e truly care for her they would eve even bother!!! Can\'t wait to see what happens when they visit Severus!!! HAPPY EASTER & til chpater 18, Deb >^..^<