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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely cracked up at the memories of Hermione following Snape and admiring his rear-end. Had you previously mentioned her seeing him in the buff, because I didn\'t know about that and it nearly shocked me out of my chair!
Harry\'s letter to Bill was so adorable! It reminded me a lot of the way I talked/wrote/thought/felt when I was calling myself \"bi-curious\" and wondering if I was feeling normal stuff. It was perfect! And Bill\'s response was great, he\'s a great brother-figure, even if he and Harry aren\'t related.
I loved Draco\'s diary and inner monologue, too. He\'s so much fun when you get into his head like that. I can\'t wait to see more and see how he reacts when he finally recognizes attraction to Harry!
Now for the big question plaguing my mind - are Hermione and Snape engaged? I mean, she seems to be accepting the vision as fact, but is he? Wow! I don\'t actually expect a straight answer because I know that it could ruin the story, but I\'ll be anxiously awaiting your next update so I can find out a little more about these people and their crazy lives!
Great work!
Harry\'s letter to Bill was so adorable! It reminded me a lot of the way I talked/wrote/thought/felt when I was calling myself \"bi-curious\" and wondering if I was feeling normal stuff. It was perfect! And Bill\'s response was great, he\'s a great brother-figure, even if he and Harry aren\'t related.
I loved Draco\'s diary and inner monologue, too. He\'s so much fun when you get into his head like that. I can\'t wait to see more and see how he reacts when he finally recognizes attraction to Harry!
Now for the big question plaguing my mind - are Hermione and Snape engaged? I mean, she seems to be accepting the vision as fact, but is he? Wow! I don\'t actually expect a straight answer because I know that it could ruin the story, but I\'ll be anxiously awaiting your next update so I can find out a little more about these people and their crazy lives!
Great work!
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My God i love this story soo much and its not slow at all...what uve got is development and thats a good thing:P Please update soon:P
Catherine
Catherine
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. It\'s certainly interesting ...
But one minor point, Lily - it\'s \"Zabini\", not \"Zambini\" ...
But one minor point, Lily - it\'s \"Zabini\", not \"Zambini\" ...
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still a wonderful fic and I am eager as ever for more!! More! MORE!! hehe Pleeeeeeze?
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for letting me know you\'ve updated! This was a great chapter! I can\'t waitsee see what Draco will do with the information that Harry\'s gay, or when he\'ll figure out WHY he doesn\'t like Pansy\'s \"molestations\". :) And there\'s no limit to what can happen during the Legilimency session... update soon!
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like the developments in this story.
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I like how you\'ve taken an in-depth approach to this idea. I\'m really looking forward to your updates!
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is great! Please email me when you update. I can\'t wait to read more of this!
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heh, Veritaserum in Truth or Dare... that\'s pretty clever. This story is off to a good start, and I can\'t wait to read more!
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Squee! You are my new favorite author!
I absolutely adore this story! The plot grabs me and the little extras--the way you let us know what the characters are thinking--are really cute.
Excellent work!
--Tegan
I absolutely adore this story! The plot grabs me and the little extras--the way you let us know what the characters are thinking--are really cute.
Excellent work!
--Tegan