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for What Is and What Should Never Be

by Padfoot79

person icecat20
schedule January 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
chapter 8: *snape steps into james' room*...............*pales HARD*... j, james never gave siri's diary back...... *begging near tears* snape don't DO it. shit i don't think my heart has ever beaten this FAST before. *hands are LITTERALLY shaking as i type this* s,s,s, snape just took the book. O.O....... SHIIIIIIIT. *telling mcgonagall* pllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeee tell me they find it in time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person pamma
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha funny chapter!
person pamma
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww! that was so cute!
person pamma
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was an awsom starting! keep it going!!
person Just Another
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOO!! Not a cliffhanger! -gasp- That story is sooo good. I\'m in shock at how good it is. I almost cried when that happened to Sirius. That\'s so sad. You MUST update fast, I have to know what happens. Is it Sirius who clutched his sholder?!? James is going to be in trouble. GAHH I MUST KNOW MORE. You ar exc excellent writer. :D
person bobby
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON!!! i was never much of a fan for sirius/james but i like this!
person meg
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
merlin that chapter was so good! i can\'t believe you ended it that way! please please please write more and soon! this is really good, youre doing an awesome job!!
person violet
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh GOD no.
Oh FUCK. No! Snape\'s got Sirius\' diary!
Oh no! Oh no! *hyperventilates*
FUCK. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON. LOVE. THIS. STORY.
person QueenyC4Slash
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The new chapters are really great. and I would like to say the fic is going a great direction. as for James I think he sould tell McGonagal they were fighting(its true) but not why or anything about Sirius\'s father. and the diary idea is cool. and I want Fluffy Angst please.

Queenyc
person alex
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first, i think james should come up with some corney lie... because it funny to see him lie and magonagal catches him... then i think it would be cute to make it fluffy... i don\'t know if you really need more of Sirius\'s journal, i think that it is pretty good with what is there already... but put some action with james and sirius. i love this pair together. they ao cuo cute!