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for Then He Opened His Mouth

by sherdelune

person Night Youkai
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a really great story. I love it keep up the good work.
person Broadway Phantom
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
She had read many stories in her short life, but had recently stopped reviwing for reasons she herself did not know. The red haired sape shifter stared at the final chapter of the story in front of her and was commpelled to beg for more, somthing the violet eyed girl didn\'t usually do. Suddenly, she was a blue dragon, \"Can\'t hold a simple shape,\" she cursed as she turned into a red desert cat, only to shift to a chesnut-dun coloured centar. \"That\'s it! I have to talk to the author.\" And so it was.
person Olleander
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!! You are a wonderful writer! The story is engaging and captivating. I can\'t wait from chapter to chapter. What talent! Keep it up...please continue this charming story. You are much to good for this alone...let us know when you write your first novel!
person Pam
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. I cannot wait for your updated chapters. If I have thought correctly the person that has a thing for Draco also is Hermione...right? The whole didn\'t call me mudblood thing and staring? Well if I am not off the mark with this, can I hope that there will be a future chapter somewhere that reduces her to tears over not being able to have him? You are the author and if I could write it I would, but I CANNOT stand Hermione, and I really enjoy any story that puts her in her place and alone. Well, anyway...love the fic.
person SailorAurora
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
prettod. od. I hope to read more. sorry for the sucky review, lack of sleep..
person LupinsLover
schedule September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!! What an excellant plot twist. I can\'t wait to find out what happens next. Good job.
person chocopop
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is good you should keep writing
person kittywittyitty
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was very well writen and QUITE perseptive ^^ keep it up, i want to know what happens!
person JEN
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I really like it so far! So keep up the good job and update soon! ^.^
Hugs and Smooches,
Jen^_^
person goldenpaw
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi Sher,

Thought I would leave a review here, since I noticed you put chapter 2 here since I had gone to bed. You know, you are just zipping through this story. You make me want to write...and I should. Sigh, now to just get the ideas and thoughts in my head to coalesce. Oh, and I tried posting a review at FFnet for this chapter, but darn it all, it\'s being a pain and I have no idea if it went through or not.

Anyway, I really loved Draco\'s point of view, and I\'m really starting to like Draco as a character, and I blame that on you. Hehe.

You still rock!