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for Then He Opened His Mouth

by sherdelune

person silverhope
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE update this story. I want the boys to move ahead with their relationship. I want the school to be told, and them accept it. I want Harry and Drcao to live happily ever after.
person dedmun
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so cute! totally wild! \'bout time draco came outta the closet. can\'t wait to find out what happens next and all that fun stuff. keep up the great.
person AnaCallista
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh you clever person. i was like okay, the title sorta makesse ise in an abstract sorta way, and now it all clicks into place. I love it when people actually think before they write.
Your style is stupendous. You have an incredible grasp of the english language, which doesn\'t seem like a compliment, but if you look at some of the \"English as a third language\" writers who are attempting to write harry potter fiction, it becomes more so. thankyou for knowing english.
That\'s not the end is it? i\'ll cry if you don\'t finish!
love,
Ana
person Hotaru
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just got done reading what you got so far and I love it ^.^! You reallve ave a knack fro writing i really got into the story, nice twists and great detail! can\'t wait to read anything else you decide to put up ^_^ Keep writing dude!!!! :: does a little dance ::
person Relle or Sarelle, whatever
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heads up on the email!! Loved it to tiny peices!! :D Update soon!
person jj the jet plane
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww omg this story is so increbably sweet!
person Magdelena
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was simply beautiful. The tension ran high from beginning to end. This was definitely a chapter worth waiting for. Oh, and the imagery for the kiss was phenomenal as well.

I can\'t wait to see where this goes from here.

Maggie
person Siriusly Black
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The last two chapters were great! Draco\'s powers of observation worked well. By picking up on what Harry was going to do, it turned out to be a great way to tell Harry how he felt. Harry\'s reaction was funny in the way he couldn\'t believe what he saw in the mirror (again and again.) Great work and I can\'t wait to see more!
person bluehearts
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was good!! thanks! i needed that after the crying fest i just had after reading another fic... that was really good!!^^ i liked the last chapter. Please write more.
person cofaym
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAYYYY!!!! WOO HOO, an update, thank you! Now when do we get the next one? *grins*