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for Then He Opened His Mouth

by sherdelune

person Dan
schedule April 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderfully done. Absolutely amazing! And then he opened his mouth... Perfect
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story! Going to go read the sequel now!!!
person ShadowAkiyah
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I can\'t really say much except I found this entlingling and amazing. It\'s a beautiful story, and you manipulated the charaters fantastically, while still managing to keep the characterisation in tact. A Marvellous read, thank you very much for sharing

SA
person laura
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like my love stories to have happy endings, too! you are an awesome writher...ket upt up!!!
person morgeth
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a sweet story! It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! It really does have a happy ending.

Jessie
person Magdelena
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ron\'s reaction was priceless. I can just picture Draco poking Harry awake while Ron\'s wand is pointed at him. Beautifully written. I\'ll miss this story. I\'ve liked it since the beginning. I can\'t wait to see where you take them with the epilogue.
person Sarelle/Relle
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa - awesome!! I demand an epiloge!! An if you do one, tell me! :D You rule!
person Bejeweled
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story, but it never got anywhere near an R rating.
person sak
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A sweet ending for a lovely story. I would not mind an epilogue as well. Cannot get too much of a good thing. The enchanted globe was a wonderful touch I enjoyed very much.
person bluehearts
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOooohhhh... that was lovely!!^^ it was one of those fics where i read a while ago and you didn\'t complete it but i remembered exactly what it was about right off the bat again!!^^ which means it was absolutely beautiful and quite original, at least compared to the other fics i\'ve read. it ended very well, i\'m not sure if another part would be good... sometimes things are left off better when the ending is so magical!!^^ good job though!!^^