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i\'d be happybetabeta for you, english is my first language, plus i\'ve always done well in english class. i\'ve been writing my self for over a year and i LOVE Harry/Draco!! i always answer my e mails within a week, so if you wantg my help, let me know! i love this fic and really want to see it continued

Nicely done! I

Ahhh! That chapter was 2 cute. I love this! Oh, but what\'s Justin planning!? If he screws things up for Harry and Draco I\'ll personally kill him. Hmm, or maybe you could have Ron kill him for me. Okie-doke, update soon!
Hugs and Kisses,
Jen^_^

Hi! Okay, this is just my opinion. Grammer/work choices needs work. (a good Beta would have caught these!) Enjoyable little romp. I like that the houshouses were able to come together so well. It is true that if the leaders of two groups can get along, their followers will adapt to the situation.
Keep writing. Little ficlets like this are candy after some of the heavy, angsty stories.

Wow, two more chapters. Thank you. Chapter two was nice and moved the story along. But I really enjoyed the fireworks in Chapter three. Poor Draco thinking that Harry was rejecting him when Harry thought Draco was talking about somone else. I could really see that happening, sometimes boys can be so insecure. Great story so far. Please continue soon.

Thanks for sharing your story with me.

Wow, I couldn\'t believe that you posted more chapters today. Thank you! I wonder how much of a problem Justin is going to give poor Harry. Keep up the nice work.

Thanks for sharing.

Nice start to a promising story. Keep up goo good work. Quick updates makes for happy readers. Thanks for sharing.