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October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twist to the HarryPotworlworld! I\'d like to see where you\'re gonna take it. Its gotta be Snape ( I love Sevie!)
I used to work in the music industry and you\'re doing a fine job of representing things so far!
One thing I would say though, if a performer saw someone in the front row they were interested in,
they wouldn\'t let them get all the way out of the building before making a move of some kind. One of
band\'s crew would take care of that right away(as soon as house lights came up)and not house
security (usually). Many times the guys in the band are as close or closer to the crew guys than they are to their fellow
bandmates. Local security is almost always a pain in the ass to the band and crew and the
bands friends, etc. Its the band\'s crew that\'s really important.
Not that I\'m trying to tell ya what to do with the story! I\'ve just been there backstage and in hotels, etc. so I\'ve seen it. (I used to be a DJ at a radio station)
OK... I\'m running off at the beak.... You probably don\'t really need all kinds of in depth info for this story so I\'ll shut up now. ;) Keep up the good work! Hmmmm Severus in leather.... yum yum..... Throw a Led Zeppelin song in for an encore sometime for me! ;)
I used to work in the music industry and you\'re doing a fine job of representing things so far!
One thing I would say though, if a performer saw someone in the front row they were interested in,
they wouldn\'t let them get all the way out of the building before making a move of some kind. One of
band\'s crew would take care of that right away(as soon as house lights came up)and not house
security (usually). Many times the guys in the band are as close or closer to the crew guys than they are to their fellow
bandmates. Local security is almost always a pain in the ass to the band and crew and the
bands friends, etc. Its the band\'s crew that\'s really important.
Not that I\'m trying to tell ya what to do with the story! I\'ve just been there backstage and in hotels, etc. so I\'ve seen it. (I used to be a DJ at a radio station)
OK... I\'m running off at the beak.... You probably don\'t really need all kinds of in depth info for this story so I\'ll shut up now. ;) Keep up the good work! Hmmmm Severus in leather.... yum yum..... Throw a Led Zeppelin song in for an encore sometime for me! ;)
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October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am in awe! I really like the direction you are taking with this so. W. Whoever this guy is (I still stand by Draco for now) he is amazing. You are very consistent and thorough in writing his character and whoever he is, he is shaping up beautifully. Really good imagery also! Keep up tood ood work...
Callan
Callan
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October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My dear.
What can I say but...WHOA! I loved the concert discription. Such a frenzy of activity. Wonderful imagry. I hope this chick isnt to easy on him...or for him...make him earn her...LOL
Great so far.
Red
What can I say but...WHOA! I loved the concert discription. Such a frenzy of activity. Wonderful imagry. I hope this chick isnt to easy on him...or for him...make him earn her...LOL
Great so far.
Red
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October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I like the first person perspective. From the clues (pale skin, the patented glare he knew could freeze most people in their tracks, he was an ost, st, previously lonely life, dressed all in black, rude, tall) I would have to guess Snape, however no mention of black eyes or hair. It would be absolutely hysterical if it turned out to be Voldemort! Update quickly please!
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October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
When I saw the clues that Red put so neatly together, they scream Wea Weasly to me. Isn\'t he the tall pale one that always feels ignored and bugger if you didn\'t drop some of his favorite expressions in the little thought bubbles. Did he pick up Severus\' patented glare? - after seven years, you\'d think he\'d bee toe to do so.
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September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Love rand and roll!! Can\'t wait for more.
At first I thought your rock star was Harry. ( Too obvious. But then again, it still could be. ) I\'d like it to be Sirius. He\'d make an excellent rock star. All that hair. Wow. But it could be... and I know this is a long shot, but still an idea... Remus. I just don\'t think he\'d treat people like that. He always seeme so nice. That\'s one reason why it would be cool if it was him.
More!!! Soon!!! Please....
At first I thought your rock star was Harry. ( Too obvious. But then again, it still could be. ) I\'d like it to be Sirius. He\'d make an excellent rock star. All that hair. Wow. But it could be... and I know this is a long shot, but still an idea... Remus. I just don\'t think he\'d treat people like that. He always seeme so nice. That\'s one reason why it would be cool if it was him.
More!!! Soon!!! Please....
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September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooops. You\'d think I\'d know how to spell my name by now.
NOCTURNALI.
Love the story.... Thanx
NOCTURNALI.
Love the story.... Thanx
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Veeeeery good story. And personally, I think tis Harry, if only for the phrase \"At least here, he wasn\'t ignored or abused\" And the constant refrences to Sheep. I think Harry knows better than anyone how sheeplike people can be.
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really think it\'s Draco! Maybe it\'s wishful thinking?? I absolutely love your writing. It\'s very high quality, which is rare. I just read Murky Waters and am completely enthralled with that one too...Can\'t wait for more of both of these stories!!
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll add my guess to the list...I think the rock star and front man is Sirius Black...one of my faves and another in the Wizarding World who has been ignored and abused, IMHO. God knows the guy deserves to have a little fun, even though it\'s apparently wearing thin for him. Do you plan on revealing?? :D
Please continue this. It\'s very enjoyable!
Cheers!
Sher
Please continue this. It\'s very enjoyable!
Cheers!
Sher