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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no the other chapter was gloomy. that is why I cried duh! :} btw loved this chapter and hope you update the story soon!
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September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Goody. Another chappie.
Severus cracks me up a bit. All his turmoil over his feelings for Al. Brood, brood, brood, that's all he does. Drama queen.
I'm glad that you are setting up Remus. He deserves some lovin too.
Cheers.
Severus cracks me up a bit. All his turmoil over his feelings for Al. Brood, brood, brood, that's all he does. Drama queen.
I'm glad that you are setting up Remus. He deserves some lovin too.
Cheers.
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m facinated with how this Muggle will view the new world in which she has been placed. Serious chapter yes, but veood.ood.
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better by the minute. So much intrigue and I love Snape\'s attitude, his uncertainty of what is happening to him. Remus has turned out to be quite the middle man in all of this. I look forward to reading more and you do a lovely job of telling a story. ep tep telling you that and I mean it. Keep it up.
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July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my dear...you know how much I love this particular story. I do like the blunt way that Severus tells her of his feeling of children. Very Snapish...very in charactor. I also liked the way that he felt that he would do better for her if he stayed behind with her. Its so sweet that he would want to feel that way. He loves her...It makes me loim. im. Another fantastic chapter!!!!
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why is it that a man has to be a stupid jerk to a woman that needs a little bit of affection?! What a jerk he was to her! It was a great chapter and all and I did cry on this one! But he needs to get a grip! :} I hope you update soon! really soon!
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I laughed my ass off when he cast the spell so dude couldn\'t get an erection! And kevin was really lusting over al, what a pervert! And Sev shouldn\'t feel like it\'s his fault for what happend to Al. I think mr. snarky is in love! :} And that\'s a good thing if he would just realize it! Welll......keep updating. Soon I hope!? :}
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa...you werent kidding about this being a more serious chapter. Poor Alisdair. Even with the sad subject I enjoyed the read. It makes me wonder how they both will work through the tragedy. I like the punishment Kevin received. Fitting, I would say. Good job. Now, as for Aletha , I have to agree with your other reviewer. She deserves Remus...hehe...Wonderful work and I cant wait for the next one!!!
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was some ass kicking.i don\'t think i would have let him live. please update soon.