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for What He\'s Always Needed

by razldazzl72

person Carmella
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sweet baby, I wonder if Draco is truly part Veela in the book . . .man you inspered me to go read it!
person chantalmalfoy
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Go Lucius! Poor Harry. I can\'t wait to \"see\" him and Draco with their
babies! I\'m so excited!

As usual I\'ll be awaiting the next chapte cha
person Pete
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see a continuation of this story. Please keep it up, it\'s a lovely story and very well written! Thanks, Pete
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HURRY AND WRITE CH 4!!!! lol I can\'t wait to see it ^_^
person chantalmalfoy
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww... This fic is so sweet. But you haven\'t addressed any physical aspects of their
relationship. I\'m not asking for smut, I\'m just thinking that two seventeen year old
boys are going to have a lot of rampant hormones... Anyway, love the fic. Can\'t wait
for more.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I assume after reading through all of your reviews that the passing out comment was
made to me. I\'m not offended or angry. It\'s just that it looks like I\'m the only
one that commented on it. So, anyway, I just thought I\'d say that yes, I have
been pregnant before. I was pregnant at 20. My son is now 5 years old. I\'ve never
passed out in my whole life, even while I was pregnant. I had a rough pregnancy, but
passing out wasn\'t one of my ailments. I thought the passing out scene in the fic was
cute. I\'m sorry if you thought I was criticizing you.
person Pixie
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
next chapter please! lol great job
person YoukoKitsune
schedule October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh thank you for finaly coming out with this story! i\'m a huge fan of learning to love a veela! if you feel like it please e-mail me. the story is wonderful so far. my cousin just had a pair oins ins a couple months ago so this development is quite entertaing keep writing please! ttfn
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!! I love CH2 please write more soon
person LINIS
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellente a new story this is what we wants to read.... interesting beginning.


LINIS