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for What He\'s Always Needed

by razldazzl72

person kd
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was such a nice story. I really enjoyed the part about the garden. I wanted them to do more then kiss and thought thingswere going so slowly and then all of a sudden they had sex. i was like wow. Lol, I enjoyed the description as always and I found that most of the characters were in fact in character. Good job.

KD
person Royal Midnight
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad - but a three hour labor would usually kill the "mother". My first labor was 28 hours, five of which were "hard labor" - the pushing part. Very fuzzy.
person e*digi
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I cried. I really cried. It was beautiful. I loved it, especially the part at getting back at the Dursley's. Im cried, still, now. I really hope you write more like this, and I will look for your name. I really enjoyed this story.
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Starts wailing* Sure, I know everyone dies... but Harry and Draco die? *Wails some more, mascra making teary trails* That was so sad!
person chantalmalfoy
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was really sad... :(
person Illusia
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked what you did to the Dursleys :) Haven\'t really never thought that Harry living there saved them, only the other way around. So this was mind opening as well. Really nice chappie
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!!! THAT WAS KICK ASS!!!!!! I can\'t wait for the next part.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow. I\'ve never read a fic where the Dursley\'s turn \"good\".
Great job!
person Carmella
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey that kicked some real butt! Can we get the rest soon?
person YoukoKitsune
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW umm how soon will those other parts be up? no exact dates nessicary but just a general idea please and i can certainly sympathzize my own writing on ff.net has deffenitly suffered sice school started if you get the chance email me thank you for an amazing two stories so far good luck in the future.