rate_review Reviews

loved this fic and i really loved your Mate for life fic!

I really enjoyed your story. I must admit that I liked \"The Shoot\" chapter and the Shoot 2 chapters the best. You really described Hermione beautifully and then Draco\'s situation of being in \"sexual agony\". Too funny! And then the photo shoot together sounded just about as \"hot\" as their sex scenes. Scary ending but, glad all the scars went away and Hermione was \"unscathed\" except for the emotional trauma. The sex scenes were really good! Great writing! Hope to see more of your work in the future.

~~ The Blue Lady ~~

I read the whole thing in one sitting and it\'s a really good and very hot story. You did a good job. I\'d praise more but I\'m to sleepy to type.

Beautiful..i was so touched by this story! I WANNA HEAR A SEQUEL! I totally love the whole MODELING thing...really awesome

Just me again. I read in your author notes that already did another Harry Potter fanfic. I couldn\'t find it posted on this site. Is it on another??? Also, I look forward to your next story. Thanks a bunch.

Maggie

Hey there,
This is a great story. I do hope you write more. If you do just let me know. Only if it\'s D/HR though. I can\'t stand the others because I am a big D?HR supporter and any other pairing makes me sick!!! Well this is great and I thit\'st\'s brilliant. The group that I\'m in read. Someone recommended it and all of us read and enjoyed it. Write some more and we will all read it!!! It\'s bloody brilliant I tell you!! Brilliant!!!

This is my first time reviewing a story, but I wanted to let you know that I thought it was H-O-T. Wow, I was impressed...

Very nice story. Good plot and nice character development. You might want to go through and fix a few grammar glitches. First, look for the proper use of \"good\" and \"well.\" Hr would say things \"went well\" and she and Draco \"got along well.\" Well is an adverb and goes with verbs. Good is an adjective and goes with nouns. For example: The boy is good. (describes the noun boy) He plays well. (describes the verb playing). Also, there really isn\'t a plural form of anyway. Even though \"anyways\" is commonly used in some parts of the States, I am pretty sure neither Draco nor Hr would use it. Hope this helps and isn\'t too negative. I really do like your story.

I quite enjoyed this story. : ) The only thing I can think of right now that could be wd ond on, is the abruptness of the ending. The story hadn\'t built to the point for me, as a reader, to be ready for the events in the epilogue. It almost felt like you skipped the sequel. IMHO, you\'d have been much better off by ending on the previous chapter with a line two added to give more of an ending feel to it. Now, of course, this is a personal opinion. : ) I\'m sure there are other readers out there who will disagree with me.

::winces:: I hope this comes off to you as it\'s intended, helpful. I truly did enjoy the story, and look forward to seeing new stories from you.


Kiri

Oh how Sweet! And Smuty!Great job