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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just read the whole story, and i absolutely loved it...it was just bloody brilliant...it was so well written and i just loved the way it ended..my favorite part was when the made love to eachother after her recovery after the finally knew they loved eachother...and the epilouge was so clever...i give it two thumbs up and a 10 out of 10 : )
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy fluff. But well-executed fluff.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read your whole fiction last night and I was very happy! What a tantalyzing thing to have them both modeling lingerie. WOW It\'s not surprising they ended up in bed. Very hot and very sexy story all around. Thank you for a great read.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo yay!! i liked it oodles. it was a very well written story. and tasteful too. there were a few grammer errors, and spelling errors in the last chapter, but the quality of the story more than made up for it. i hope you continue writing, for your story was wonderful. best wishes
-jean
-jean
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done! It was brilliant... and good luck with your future writings!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was... wow.
So romantic. And sad and Draco was just wonderful - as was the way you formed his friendships with Ron and Harry.
For a first smut fic, this was awesome. And I look forward to reading many more of your stories. Just one nit pick - some of the coding of the story has gone a little hay-wire, and words are missing or running together. But still... wow.
I didn\'t bother reading the epilogue, the way you ended chapter nineteen was beautiful just by itself.
Bek
So romantic. And sad and Draco was just wonderful - as was the way you formed his friendships with Ron and Harry.
For a first smut fic, this was awesome. And I look forward to reading many more of your stories. Just one nit pick - some of the coding of the story has gone a little hay-wire, and words are missing or running together. But still... wow.
I didn\'t bother reading the epilogue, the way you ended chapter nineteen was beautiful just by itself.
Bek
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the epilogue was nice, but it was too short....
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story. It was just the kind of story I was looking for the other day. I hope you write more stories just as good as this one.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my fucking god. This is only the second story that i have reveiwed. it was awsome i could not stop reading. SOOOOOO good. Thank you!!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the BEST fan-fiction i have ever read. I DIDN\'T PAUSE FOR A SECOND!!the plot was amazing. You are a terrific writer and i hope to read more pieces from u soon. I actually felt the emotion of the drama. I WOULD READ IT OVER AND OVER!!!