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for Hermione\'s First Kiss

by psychocatblah

person SpiritOfLupin
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, Loved it. I wouldn\'t mind a couple of those stones. lol. xx
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will be continuing this story. It has lots of potental.

Tiffany
person GeekGoddess
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was adorable.... would like to read more about Hermione and Snape enjoying the stones a little later.
person GeekGoddess
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was just reading others comments and I think the story is perfect the way it is too since Snape would prbably not get involved with a student.....but now what about the day after graduation she could send him a stone and tell him to meet her somewhere and there we could see the start of an adult relationship.
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was good! I think you sd ded develop it into a full-length story because you've got something fabulous here.
person crissy
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very sweet.
person alicat999
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You can\'t leave it there I implore you to continue please...xoxox
person droxy
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awe that was very cute!
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome story. Very discriptive and i loved how they got caught. I also like how you could write out of character becuase of the ltonetones! Very Inventive and Enjoyable.
I want a sequel!!! NOW!!!
person ancientgirl
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was very cute. Are you thinking about adding more to this?