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for Hermione\'s First Kiss

by psychocatblah

schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! That was so entirely adorable. ^.^ I loved how you wrote that. It was amusing that Severus went so far as to explain what was happening before he once again felt that "pull." Wonderful job.
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person a_reader
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled upon this while vine swinging through other people's favorites and wanted to say, what a perfectly LOVELY story.
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person .
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww...
person Tomi
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I had to stiffle my laughter at the end so I wouldn\'t wake up my stepmom. You\'ve got a knack for comedy. And it was just cute enough that anyone can enjoy it. No lemons, no smut, just clean and cute. I loved it!
person JTBJAB
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That\'s brilliant! Absolutely hilarious!!!!! Excellant, I can\'t stop smiling!
person Laura
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good for such a short bit! Wishing there were more....
person makun
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! i dont normally read herm and snape but this was really very sweet i loved it!
person rboothe
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. I love that they\'re drawn to each other against their wills. Perhaps it will spark the start of a relationship between them? I hope so! Good job.