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for Not the best of Birthdays.

by Hel

person dradd
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pure class! This compliments the 1st chapter nicely. With talent like this, have you considered writing an original stand-alone story of your own? I\'m sure you could do it. :)
person shemhamforash
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooo! WOW! damn! ahhhh sooooo goood!

Unable to say anything else---left speechless by story so far.

Damn! that was sooo damn goooood!

Waiting for more

Shemhamforash xxx
person Rilla
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to see what happens next!
person Darkfaith
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please don\'t let this be a dream! It\'s way to interesting to cop out that way. Keep going!
person MoD
schedule September 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww Hel You left me hanging! I like the murderous Hooch! Please update soon
person jessicat1982
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you\'ve characterized the \'grown up\' hermione. I just wish you had jumped into the realm of ss/hg sooner:) really great start. I can\'t wait to find out what happened with hooch and the hufflepuff.
person giova
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You really need to finish this so I can find out what the heck happened! the suspence is killing me!
person oz_angel
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione!!! This story has me hooked after 1 chapter (I guess evil cliffhangers can do that). Please write more soon.
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOLY ****! Wow! Ok...you got my attention! I be be awaiting nex next chapter!!
Good luck!

Heather..

PS. This did nothing to calm my fear of the dark, and will surely cause me nightmares :P Good Job. LOL
person Heather
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Umm..I don\'t know how my name didn\'t appear, but that was my review. :P