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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The very last paragraph was totally unnecessary. It's much more interesting to think about how this will affect their interactions in the future.
It seems like some of the text got a little scrambled when this was uploaded, so it could use a little editing. But the way you write is really great. Your use if language and ability to describe things is top-notch and the concept itself is really sexy.
[LOL, the captcha phrase was "nudism bodies."]
It seems like some of the text got a little scrambled when this was uploaded, so it could use a little editing. But the way you write is really great. Your use if language and ability to describe things is top-notch and the concept itself is really sexy.
[LOL, the captcha phrase was "nudism bodies."]
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell yeah, you cna't go wrong with those three, nice job! very HOT!
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow!! you really should do a second chapter to this... from SS/LM point of view???
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What is more to say than 'I love dreams!'?
Most of all when you wrote about them.
You're a fabulous writer, give us more of that!
Just one thing: Somehow two words make one sometimes and letters are deleted. Could you have a look at it?
Most of all when you wrote about them.
You're a fabulous writer, give us more of that!
Just one thing: Somehow two words make one sometimes and letters are deleted. Could you have a look at it?
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As I was reading this it seemed very familiar, then I realised that we had an ex Professor in common! I love the changes it works wellathyathy N ;-)
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November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant. :D Don\'t change a thing.