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I am in awe! Normally I am not a darkfic type person, but this... is incredible. I am totally stunned by your ability to weave such powerful imagery! And the pain of both Remus and Severus is palpable. I absolutely adore the Remus/Severus ship, and even though this isn\'t \"romantic\", I definitely think you have woven a more believable version of a relationship between them than almost anyone I have ever read. Please, please continue, this is thrilling!

Dear Zyta,

This to me is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. This piece captured me from the beginning to the most recent chapter. This is well and truly special, very special and MORE than original. I am captured by your work here, the relationship between these two is brewing, and I\'m afraid you have me hooked.

This story is well written, it is genuine. A sparkle. I don\'t often say this, and I swear, my eyes were locked on the screen. I am truly in love with this. It deserves No.1 on my list. It truly does.

PLEASE you must update. YOU MUST! You can\'t leave any of us hanging like that, if that was meant to be your ending, it left me feeling like... like... abandoned and lost. YOU HAVE to continue writing this, darling, you have a talent!

Hugs,
lily.

This is a great story but I haven\'t seen any more chapters added. Please do carry on with it as I want to see what happens to Remus and Severus. Looking forward to seeing more chapters soon.

I like this fic a lot, so I wanted to know if you will update it anytime soon ^^

you said more to come, i want more to come. please

I have really enjoyed this so far, angst and all. While I know RL can be a pain and the muse can be illusive. I hope that you will eventually be inspired to continue.

Wow...amazing, Interesting and strong plot. The idea of Snape deciding to save his owm neck sounds great. I\'ll be watching this one, so please keep writing and update soon.

Wow. I certainly hope this continues. I like a cruel and crazed Snape but have never really seen him and Lupin. Now, however, I am beginning to appreciate it. I hope there is more angst and sex and revalations and sex and angst and sex to come.

Amorette

First off, I\'ve gotta say... Wow! I think this is the first decent HP fanfic I\'ve ever read! (Or at least for a long time.) I\'ve gotta give you wicked points for not only keeping the storyline canon, you\'ve done a fantastic
job keeping your characters IN character. Because as much as we all really do love Snape, he really isn\'t a very mushy guy, and this is one of the first bits I\'ve read in which he isn\'t just some sap covered by some
kind of dark cloak. Also, your writing is... pretty sodding good, too. (Adjectives fail me at the moment. Sorry.) Your description is phenomenal; I could actually picture in my mind\'s eye just what you were writing, and
that isn\'t always an easy feat. Please don\'t let this one go, or start writing something original. You\'re a good writer; you shouldn\'t waste it all on fanfic. But that\'s just my humble opinion. ;) Anyhow, kudos and bravo!
Cheers, love, and light,
azrael

I\'m very glad to see a new chapter updated!
Yes, I agree with you; Snape should be cruel and I like it. Good characterization.
Poor Lupin... He sometimes seems to be spineless but I believe he\'s brave enough to achieve whatever he\'d plan to in the end.
I hope you could kindly update sooner as I can\'t wait it!
Cheers!