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O wow. I'm sitting here reading this story and have reached the last chapter. I've looked at the last time you've updated and I'm ready to cry. This fanfic is so good! Well done and a pleasure to read. I wonder if you're planning to update anytime soon???

I think you did a wonderful job with snarky snape. O I love it. None of that fluff with that man. I agree with you, he's really just fine the way he is. And Remus, wow. Really believable character. Great job.

Yes, please finish this story. I scower the net looking for fics with this much originality and imagination. Snape is perfect, all too often people try to turn him into \"a nice guy.\" Well he isn\'t. And you haven\'t written him that way, an i love you for it. Snape is cold, very smart and very complex, and you have captured all these traits wonderfully in your own Snape.

Finish this story. I need to see how this fic ends. I\'ll be checking up on you soon...


Zero

*cough* and where be-eth the next chapter, hmm? WHERE IS IT?!?! *does fluster dance* I need to know what happens! This is written so well and to stop it there is completely unfair (That rhymed...sorry oO )) !! You must post the next chapter soon or I will die!

I really like how Remus went into a rage, it seems like it should be OOC, but it\'s not because, like you said, he\'s got the werewolf in him and stuff. I\'m glad he destroyed Mrs. Black, I hate that old hag >< He should more on to Kreacher next.

Hey, what\'s the shortened form of Severus Snape/Remus Lupin, I know Snape/Harry is Snarry, but I cant think of one for those two, do you know oO? All the things I\'ve tried just sound like I\'m sneezing...

PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!!! I BEG YOU!

Well, I never left a review because I was under the impression that such a gift writter as you wouldn\'t need a poor insignifiant thing like me to comment her work. But I recently discovered that it often makes a day happier to know that somebody somewhere likes what we\'re doing soooooooo... Yeaah I love your story, it\'s so realistic, the characterizations so accurate that I cried when I didn\'t see any updating coming. (er, right I\'m a mad little girl, but hey! who isn\'t?) I know I\'m rambling but now you know someone cares and admires your writing. In other words I\'ll be glad to see you inuiinuing on this story but if you don\'t I \'ll feel honored for having read a little of it anyway.
big kisses.
Take care.
Mekukui ( a french fan of yours ;) )

Is there going to be any more? I just love it, you don\'t see many remus/severus fanfics you know.


keep going!!!!

please post more, this story is great!

Zyta -- Ooo, I\'m so bummed to come to the end. More please! And yes, it is very very clear that you love nasty old Snape. He\'s a great villian here, and I mean it in the most complimentary way. You couldn\'t write him so well if you didn\'t love him.

Quibbles -- you have confused the words \"lose\" as in to lose something, with \"loose\" as in a loose tooth. You have a spellcheck, but there are several of these homonym confusions in here and it would give it the spotless presentation it deserves tve sve some zealous grind like Hermione go over it and catch them. I\'m only mentioning this because it\'s so good and deserves editing perfection. If you\'d like me to do, just say so.

CG

Zyta, this is super. Dreams are so hard to write, and you\'ve caught the sense of one so clearly -- the internal logic, the lack of surprise, the unawareness of the dreaming s. A. And I like your Snape and Lupin a lot. I\'m not big on the Canon-Noncanon issue -- do what you like, as long as your character is believable -- but your Snape is Canon. Yet poignant, and I certainly believe that JKR would allow some compassion for someone so obviously distorted. I cant wait to see what comes after chapter 4. Keep it up!

Candygirl

Thank you Zyta for updating so quickly!

I love this chapter, it\'s very brutal, and that\'s what I love. It\'s great to see such a well written canon character get a little dangerous and snarl, destroy paintings and quite frankly, almost have a nervous break down. For the killing Mrs. Black part, I was on the edge of my seat, I don\'t recall seeing a fan fic which actually explored what would happen to a painting if the person within was... brutally murdered. Simply amazing. Again, that way of words and how you describe agony, it\'s simply splendid.

So he\'s returning to Snape... excellent plot line I see ahead.

Keep going, I give you the thumbs up, and I look forward to chapter seven!

hugs,
Lily.

Awwwww!! Youldouldn\'t know how happy I was to see the new chapeter up finally after waiting for so long... Anyway, thanks for sharing.
Many fanfiction writers write Remus as a calm, kind person and I agree with that characterization mostly, however, I\'ve always thought there should be more in him. everyone has his own limits and he\'s a wolf after all...so I liked your raged Remus in this chapter and glad he could have such a chance to release his own suppressed emotions. It\'s much healthier. I look forward to how Remus who gave up playing a Nice man will try to break the walls Snape had built around him...