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for Mortal Eternity

by Sarryn

person Dhalim
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
^^ this is interesting, and has so much potential! i do hope you continue with this one day :)
person dreamerdoll
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this story!! I can't wait to read more! You did so well...I love the idea of his mother like that. It was amazing, I can't wait for more!!!
person ryuuta
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was sweet. This wasn't the end, was it?
person Isidoria
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story....this story. I can\'t even discribe it really. The writing is so rich, and the characters are deep. The insane Lily is just...it goes beyond amazing. You write her so well, she is so hateful...angry... The relationship between Harry and Lily is almost incestuous with one sided affection. Tom is beautiful, taking care of Harry who loves him. Gods. lol. This is just amazing and so much more. Please update soon!
person Kristina
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, i love this story, awesomely written, and i loved being your 400th reviewer, how fun! heh, will you please send me a email when you add another chapter to this lovely story? i really enjoyed it and id like to keep reading it, its so hard to find good harry/tom smut!
well, thank you
luv ya
Kriss
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. So what happens now? coolsa.
person ~cry~
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the plot. It\'s so different from other HP fics. And I love your portrayal of Voldemort and Lupin! Do continue soon!
person kaitlin
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story...rather scary but really nice...i would like it if you would continue writing it...rather soon please...
person TKiwi
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
my gawd, i love your writting! it all flows together so nicely and you leave me pinning for more! MORE, i beg of you, MOOOOORE! *pouts*

-Kiwi
person chantalmalfoy
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
poor moony.

I do like the way this fic is going. I\'m always up for some tom/harry.