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December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.... Wonderful writing!
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November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was very moving and strong. Very sad, too. Very well written. It makes me feel sad and I just want to ponder now. Wow.
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::snicker:: Oh, that was great... I love how it progresses and the real story slowly unfolds. And, of course, the twist at the end. Awesome work. A complete lack of mechanical errors greatly aided my enjoyment of this as well. Either you\'re just twisted or you have an amazing understanding of the human mind... either way, and mind you, either are good, I\'d love to see more stories like this. Very original!
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November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!
The twins are just terrible aren\'t they? hehehe I read the first three books and like how characters match how they were in the novels or well come pretty close considering. LOL
The twins are just terrible aren\'t they? hehehe I read the first three books and like how characters match how they were in the novels or well come pretty close considering. LOL
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September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
my lord. this was disturbingly amazing.
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that is by far one of the most powerful stories ive read thus far. if you dont mind me going peer critiquing on you (my creative writing class for my major has corrupted me), your use of repetition was certainly the most intensive of it all. is this a one shot deal or is there more to come? i, for one, would love to see the twins find out and then beat percy into a bloody pulp, but i adore the twins. if it is only a one-shot, then my hats off to you. you are certainly gifted with making a statement.
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God.....*blanches*
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This squicked me to hell and gone, but it kept me going--and that final punchline blew me away. Damn, this is good--keep writing!
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn well written story. The highlights are Ron wondering \"why he forgot that part\" and how George and Fred deal with the rumour.
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God I did not see that one coming. Bravo, very good. o.0 But I\'m twisted like that...