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by Edelweiss

person MissCrystalix
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOO I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
person nesscafe
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I have no problems w/ slightly ooc Snape once in a while! ;c) And as long as he becomes her lover I will forgive you! *hint hint* I really loved the last chapter. She took the whole thing really well and thank you for explaining why she took off! Love the addition of the letters from the kids! Those were so very sweet! Can\'t wait for then next installment! Update really soon!
person MissCrystalix
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! WHAT HAPPENS WHAT HAPPENS???????????
person jenn
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story. I like that fact that both Remu and Severus are potential love interests. Makes it much more interesting. Update soon!!
person Katie
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool story so far! I am enjoying reading it! Are you going to parryarry with someone in this story? Or are you just going to focus mainly on Hermione/Snape/Lupin? I was just curious! I hope you update soon cuz this story is good! :-)
KISSES
person Deb>^..^<
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a GREAT chapter.... can\'t wait for what\'s to come next!!! Deb >^..^<
person nesscafe
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear! What has he done indeed? What will Hermione think now? Will she understand or be scared of him? Will she hate him or feel sorry for him? OH I hope you can update soon!
person J.P.
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! :,) Write more soon, please!!!!!!
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry..I am I seeing things???...Did I just read that Sev kissed Hermione and she ran away screaming...no...nope I must be mistaken...I have to be mistaken....She would not do that to my poor Sevvie...Evil evil author...I curse thee to hell *snarls* Ok, not really...can I just cry instead?....

Currently in too much shock to demand more...Oh, Hell no I\'m not

I WANT MORE NOW!!!!!

Shem xxx
person Tanya
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story so far! I hope you update soon!
Tanya~