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by Edelweiss

schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i luv u and i dont want u to think im giving up on u! im still checking for updates nearly everyday. keep going, chica!
person mele
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cheers and the crowd goes wild!* well it\'s about time he said the \"L\" word! yeah! glad your back, now get to work! aloha, mele
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13... I am so glad to hear that your concert went well!!! I won\'t be giving up on this story, I LOVE it!!!

I feel bad for Severus in a way, but I do hope that he will remember that she is young & he will need to give her some time!!! I would hope that he would want to nurture whatever may be & to do that he will have to open up to her & talk to her, not shut her out!!!

I like how you added the bits of humor in this chapter!!! I also like the letter that Harry sent to Hermione!!!

Will we be seeing more of Remus & the children soon? Will he tell her of his feelings for her?

Can\'t wait for more!!! Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^<
person MaddyRiddle
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww Poor Hermione! (yeah, right, as I can be sad because she doesn\'t know what to do with those two! Why can I have them!?)
Please, please, update soon! I want to know what happened with Remus.... please?
person Snapeaholic
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, and even though your updates are infrequent, the chapters just keep getting better and better! Who will Hermione chose? I\'m rooting for Snape! Love the story!
person Jamie
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved your story! it was captivating, interesting and i cant wait to read what you post next! keep up the great writing!
person Grill
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! Go Severus, you brave brave man!! Go, Severus, go! Kick the shit out of Remus!!! Show him who\'s the REAL guy!
Sorry, got carried away there... Anyways, this is really great, and really exciting! And I\'m rooting for Severus, as you might have noticed... I don\'t much care for Lupin. But that\'s so brilliant about this story, you make the reader wonder who Hermione will really choose! I sure hope it\'s gonna be Snape though, that\'s who I\'d chose, without hesitation... Anyways, keep it coming, please, it\'s brilliant!
Go Severus! Get the woman you love...! ;)
person MissCrystalix
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
person PotionsMistressM
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Awesome chapter! Sev said it! *Doing the happy dance....* I hope you update soon!
person ravin
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! i love this story! I hope she chooses remus. there are alot of Hermione/Severus stories, but even if that\'s how this one turns out, i\'ll still love it. update soon!