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March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok I don't usually write reviews tell the end and knowing this not the last chapter to go up yet but it is the one you ended with. I'd like to keep reading so pleas
Put up more. So far it's good but you left very cliff hanger like. And I'd really to see who choose course it's snape because it's under that category but want see how she choose. Your fan so far
Wolfgirl
Put up more. So far it's good but you left very cliff hanger like. And I'd really to see who choose course it's snape because it's under that category but want see how she choose. Your fan so far
Wolfgirl
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April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, and I wish you would continue it.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m still holding out faith that you will update this! This fic quickly became one of my utmost favorites and I really wish for more. However, I understand that life can be demanding, I just hope all is well for you!
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that is a great story please write more i would love to read more and hmmm is remus severus and mione all going to get togethere hmm that would me something no ... well please update sooon and in till then keep up the great work and later for now
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have crashed a computer & had much chaos going on in my life, but I wanted to check on your story in hope that you had updated.... I do hope that all is well for you & I would very much appreciate it if you could email me when you have a chance to update!!! Take Care, Deb >^..^<
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is late so I hope this makes s. (. (Also, I have to rewrite this damn thing because I couldn\'t get the review to go through last time)
Oh my, I feel for Hermione. I am torn as well. Both men are tortured souls who deserve a little joy. I have always thought that Hermione is a good match for either one, bse tse there is no one her age that could match her intellect and passion for knowledge. My first inclination is to support Remus. He is intelligent and has a good heart. He has lost so much, and he deserves some measure of happiness. And he\'ll need help with the children. Wiley fey factor into Hermione\'s choice. I have a feeling they\'ll add a dimension that will make it harder for her consider the men alone. Then, there is my ever increasing soft spot for Severus. He has demons nipping at his soul, and it would be great for him to experience love and understanding so he can fight them. He suffers for his redemption and seeks no gl ( (And in your world he is already suicidal. Imagine what rejection and heartbreak would do to him.)
As for the men, neither of them is bothered enough about her age I think. (Not that it should stop them in the end, but it should cause them to pause and fret a little. Guilt and fighting the emotions are definitely in order.) And Severus\' confession of love was way OoC. He is dark and brooding, and his jealously would more likely manifest itself in foul temper.
She is full of compassion, understanding, and love (good for both of them) and her quick wit and hot temper can more than match the snarky Professor. I need more to go on. I need to see where her passion lies (not just her compassion). Would Remus lose his animal edge if he is cured? I imagine that Severus is very powerful wizard that values his control. Is he also reigning in a passionate nature or is he an emotional frightened child beneath the carefully cultured veneer of his persona? PLEASE keep writing. It\'s an interesting story. I am afraid I can\'t stand it when stories have no ending. I need closure.
May your muse shine brightly and light your mind!
Oh my, I feel for Hermione. I am torn as well. Both men are tortured souls who deserve a little joy. I have always thought that Hermione is a good match for either one, bse tse there is no one her age that could match her intellect and passion for knowledge. My first inclination is to support Remus. He is intelligent and has a good heart. He has lost so much, and he deserves some measure of happiness. And he\'ll need help with the children. Wiley fey factor into Hermione\'s choice. I have a feeling they\'ll add a dimension that will make it harder for her consider the men alone. Then, there is my ever increasing soft spot for Severus. He has demons nipping at his soul, and it would be great for him to experience love and understanding so he can fight them. He suffers for his redemption and seeks no gl ( (And in your world he is already suicidal. Imagine what rejection and heartbreak would do to him.)
As for the men, neither of them is bothered enough about her age I think. (Not that it should stop them in the end, but it should cause them to pause and fret a little. Guilt and fighting the emotions are definitely in order.) And Severus\' confession of love was way OoC. He is dark and brooding, and his jealously would more likely manifest itself in foul temper.
She is full of compassion, understanding, and love (good for both of them) and her quick wit and hot temper can more than match the snarky Professor. I need more to go on. I need to see where her passion lies (not just her compassion). Would Remus lose his animal edge if he is cured? I imagine that Severus is very powerful wizard that values his control. Is he also reigning in a passionate nature or is he an emotional frightened child beneath the carefully cultured veneer of his persona? PLEASE keep writing. It\'s an interesting story. I am afraid I can\'t stand it when stories have no ending. I need closure.
May your muse shine brightly and light your mind!
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, this story is awesome. I don\'t review offten so this is a big deal coming from me. I love that we have a bit of compitition between old rivals but like I believe others have said the whole Hermione and Snape work together things isn\'t orginal but how many different ways can you make them spend time together really. I loved the dream chapter and was hoping it would lead to some lemony goodness unfortunately you had other ideas first oh well. you are the writer and I\'m sure you won\'t let me down and have lemony goodness faily soon or at least I hope. Keep writing and PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE!!!! update soon. ; )
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February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
new reader here...this is very interesting! i think i know who hermione is going to end with at the end...anyways, update soon!
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February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new chapter! I\'m so excited! Excellent! Can\'t believe VOldemort tried to blow up Harry. That sucks! Sorry if review is not quite logical- having a very odd day- much Nyquil in system! Can\'t wait for more! ANd PLEASE let Severus get some! He deserves it!