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CONTINUE IT OR ELSE........JK!!!its excellent so please continue.email me on what you are going to do.

i really like the story.it was very kinky. u should really contuine it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was an amazing story.

I enjoyed the story, the only complaint I have is you continually called his dick a \"second brain\" that got old after about the second time. I enjoy stories of Harry and Ginny, and Ron and Hermione.

Okay, I know this story was written a while ago, but I just read it and have to make a few comments. Make no mistake, your story is good. However, the sex scene was off enough that someone who was really uninformed about sex might get the wrong idea. You were right about the condom, however, it takes several days for sperm to reach and fertilize an egg, so yeah, he could have found a spell in time. Also, there is no \"safe\" time of the month to have sex - there is always a chance of getting pregnant. Good use of Accio, I\'ll admit. Also, you need another term rather than \"second brain\" as it was repeated way too much. This is not meant to be a flame, just comments.

Absolutely grand!!! My fave ship!!! More!!!!

Great fanfic!!!

Keep it going

I like the Harry/Ginny pairing, but it isnt very believably written. Virgins don\'t USUALLY say \"Fuck me.\"

good job mate! kontinue the story, a little bit on the ungraphic side though, and \'suckle\' should be replaced with nipped or sucked gently.
continue the story
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pr0

wow that was great i loved it wonderful

i want more