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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good so far please update asap!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please write more I really like this story
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you really should continue that one... even if it's multiple sexual encounters... that was just hot!
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eh... yeah... first chapter was WAY better. this was way too rushed. you put an entire lifetime into one paragraph. definitely too rushed.
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, the plot was very quick and I wasn\'t the biggest fan of the ending. You spent more time on them having sex then ever spending more time on other things that made up their romance. Their relationship seemed more physical, there weren\'t very many adjectives inscribing simple things like how Harry loves the way Ginny does a certain thing that seems so small. Then again, I feel for you when people demand more of your story. I was just saying that your plot was very short and quick. I did like your style or writing in some parts of the stoty, mostly in the second chapter, the first just seemed slightly different.
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the last type-o; my fault
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry was a virgin until he was 27? Ron and Hermione having sex in a bar? A little out of character. The smarter plan would have been to elope, then announce that they had gotten married. Then when the baby came, just tell everyone the baby was doing great for being a 32 week pregnancy. I would never have wanted people to think that Harry was only marrying her because of the pregnancy.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello i thought the story was very well written but honestlyitseemed like you got lazy at the end.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this was a greart story. I liked the style of which you wrote your story. I really like the 2nd chapter, except for the ending. I think you should have continued the story and not have rushed into an ending. I think you should consider a 2nd version of the story and continue it and not rush an ending. I think should go into more detail of what happened to harry and ginny after the day they told her family. Your story I would say would of made it to my top ten list of harry/ginny fanfic if not had the rush on the ending. You should still use your ending as an outline for the rest of the story but use more detail. Keep up the good work.