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A very interesting start to what looks like a complex dilemma.

Interesting revelations all round actually. The warm familiarity of Albus and Hermione\'s chess match is very well done, as are visuvisual markers and quirks of the pieces. They add a whole new depth to wcoulcould have been just another chess interlude. This it is not, is a credit to your writing style.

The revelations of Snape and the eavesdropping of Hermiohelphelp to draw the story into a more dynamic and suspenseful plot.

I\'ll be interested to see where you lead the characters it it promises to be an intriguing and beguiling ride.

Quillusion submits the beginning of what looks to be another well-written story with complex and thought-provoking characterizations. I love the depth and detail. I\'m very eager to see if this \"large problem\" is resolved to my satisfaction, not to mention rus\rus\' and Hermione\'s.

Always a delight to read your work. Always a treat to read about virginal severus. Will Hermione give him a hand with his little \'problem\' I wonder?

Now this is an interesting story! I hope you set up the next chapter like today!!! I can\'t wait to see what is said next!!! Will Hermione be a virgin also? Will she deflower Snape? Oh the wait is killing me!!!

Oh how I love the way you write! This story
is off to a very promising start. Snape a virgin. I
have read this other places, but your approach is
very refreshing. Just the fact that Hermione was
present when he admitted this to Albus was priceless,
just priceless! LOL Especially when she started to
add salt to the wounds saying no Slytherin made it
past their fifth year being a virgin. And when he said
if you tell me Neville Longbottom even got laid, I will
kill you. I was laughing to hard. Thank you! But the
best part was her answer at the end - Yes.

Please up date soon!

Hug,
Corazon

Ooh, intriguing! Was it all the recent \"Snape-as-a-virgin\" discussion on WIKTT that gave birth to this bunny? I love how you\'ve set this up, and as always you\'ve written it beautifully. Looking forward to more!!

This is a wonderful story and I can\'t wait to read more! Please update soon. By the way-I absolutely love all your stories.

I am so glad you decided to post this. I hope you finish it.

i can alrealy tell that i am going to love this o can can\'t wait to find out if hermione is too. could make for some fun in the future.

This is charming. I\'m not sure why that word particularly seems apt - one could also say \"compelling\" and \"intriguing\" and \"very, very good\", but for some reason this also haselicelicate charm.

I want to read the rest of it now!! So get writing, please!

And, of course, let WIKTT know when you update ...

Oh yes. As well as being charming it is - well, very gently heart-rending. It inspires the earnest wish to pull Severus close and give him a great big hug. Which would no doubt alarm him considerably.