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by Quillusion

person shemhamforash
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok...I am currently taking the liberty of smacking myself across the head with a dead cat *idiot idiot idiot idi..Mrrroooowwww* Shit....I really did think it was dead!... In case you couldn\'t tell from my last review, and you would have to be a complete dunce of Longbottom proportions not too (which you certainly aren\'t consing yng you story up until now) I didn\'t read past the first chapter.. *idiot idiot idiot* Such a self-sacrifical lamb is our dear Hermione. I am sure that Deflowering Snape would indeed be that.. One huge sacrifice (Incase you can\'t tell, my voice/thoughts/words are laced with copius amounts of sarcasm...)

Damn lucky little chit.

Shem
person Kiristeen
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!!!! ::fans self to calm down::

Now *that* was worth the wait. Humor -- adored the chess pieces and nearly died laughing at their antics and the subtle humor laced throughout what *had* to have been a very embarrassing confrontation (and could have been so much worse). And sensual heat!!?? Oh my! ::goes back to fanning self:: It\'s been awhile since I responded so strongly to something so innocent. All I can say is \"Wow\" and bow to your skill.

Oh, that, and plllllllllleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeee don\ake ake me wait quite so long for the next part. LOL


Kiri
person Louise
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing! What a great story!
person Lancelot
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to hear more about this. Please update SOON?
person willow
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
update already.
person ShagsTheDustmop
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww... Virgin!Snape, my favorite :)
person Svenni
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Really great plot, would love to read the next chapters, I just need to know how Sev is going to react...! Update soon!
person Anon
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful beginning, I am looking forward to another brilliant story from you. Joy! Joy!
person Seraphina
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting first chapter with an intriguing premise, and really beautifully written. I love virgin Snape stories, so I\'m very keen to see how you develop this. I\'m also keeping my fingers crossed that Hermione is a virgin as well:C) Looking forward to your next update.
person Anon
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! One heck of a last liner!!!! But OMG how could you leave us hanging like that?????? Great beginning, I\'m *VERY* eagerly awaiting Snape\'s reaction to Hermione\'s surprised \"yes\". : )~


Kiri