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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story so far! I\'ve always enjoyed reading your Harry Potter fanfiction--back in the days of Fanfiction.net--so it\'s great to see your more recent writings aff.net! Your writing style is really something to be admired. Please continue this story soon!
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent second chapter, very sensual, but what a place to leave us. I\'m feeling rather hot under the collar just thinking about \"virginal but not innocent\" Snape being deflowered in the next chapter!!! I can hardly contain myself *reaches for smelling salts*
I also loved the way you injected soo much humour and sweetness into this part with the chess pieces reaction to Snape and Hermione. I know exactly how the white queen felt at the end of the chapter, and I\'d like to applaud the actions of the black king, the saucy little devil!
Thank you, I\'m enjoying this wonderful fic immensely and I\'ll keep my fingers crossed for another update soon.
I also loved the way you injected soo much humour and sweetness into this part with the chess pieces reaction to Snape and Hermione. I know exactly how the white queen felt at the end of the chapter, and I\'d like to applaud the actions of the black king, the saucy little devil!
Thank you, I\'m enjoying this wonderful fic immensely and I\'ll keep my fingers crossed for another update soon.
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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You MUST finish this story, or I will be forced to - how is it Snape put it? - you you six ways to Sunday. i read it once, then again, simply for the pleasure of the lovely, complex dialogue. Such a deft touch with the characters...oh, yes, this made my night. Please don\'t abandon me - I mean, THE STORY! MORE, MORE, MORE...soon.
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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE continue with this story!!! I LOVE the Severus & Hermione pairing (just look at my email addy). I think this story is off to a great start & really is quite different from the many Severus/Hermione stories that I\'ve read. I look forward to reading further chapters*
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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I want more chapters! Now! ;) This is an amazing story.......I love the progression and dialogue. Very interesting and can\'t wait for more.
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Rarely do you ever see such detail in a fan fiction. You have greatly mastered the art of creation with beautiful, intelligent vocabulary and quite an imagination. Snape is quite an appealing character, and bettered by this writing. Quite alikelikely pair - yes. I do hope this continues!
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adored your secondary plot line with the chess pieces. Wonderful story.
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! I love the wording in this fic! AND THE CHESS PIECES! i\'m in an odd mood... *sigh* loved this chapter! excellent! encore!
MORE MORE!
ciao,
Fish
MORE MORE!
ciao,
Fish
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gah.
Am speechless. Mouth is vaguely opening and shug fog forming the word \'more!\'. Oh god, I loved this! The chess pieces were inspired, please keep them through the rest of the story...anyway you can! \'I\'m a virgin, not an innocent\' - promises promises, Professor Snape. I do believe that was one of the sexiest kisses I\'ve read on here, and to say I am jealous is an understatement! How I long to be in hermione\'s place right now. *wipes trail of drool from chin* Please let them have fun, please!!
Of course, there is a decent plot line going on as well here, I can\'t neglect to say that, plus a fabulous writing style that has so much potential!
You know, for someone who claimed to be speechless at the beginning of this review, I have a lot of positive comments to say! Bravo! *throws roses in general direction of author* Please more, more I beg you!
daya.
Am speechless. Mouth is vaguely opening and shug fog forming the word \'more!\'. Oh god, I loved this! The chess pieces were inspired, please keep them through the rest of the story...anyway you can! \'I\'m a virgin, not an innocent\' - promises promises, Professor Snape. I do believe that was one of the sexiest kisses I\'ve read on here, and to say I am jealous is an understatement! How I long to be in hermione\'s place right now. *wipes trail of drool from chin* Please let them have fun, please!!
Of course, there is a decent plot line going on as well here, I can\'t neglect to say that, plus a fabulous writing style that has so much potential!
You know, for someone who claimed to be speechless at the beginning of this review, I have a lot of positive comments to say! Bravo! *throws roses in general direction of author* Please more, more I beg you!
daya.