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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Superb, and well worth the wait. One of the best love scenes I have read and definitely shouldnt be debased with the name smut.
Dont make us wait too long for the next chapter though. Real life can wait.
Dont make us wait too long for the next chapter though. Real life can wait.
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so happy to see the new chapter. It was breathtaking, really. Wow. Just, wow.
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
it\'s been so long since your last update that I had forgotten that I had already read (and enjoyed) the first two chapters of this story. This third, though, was well worth the wait. very yummy indeeed.
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"It was odd, she thought to herself, to see such warm, achingly soft eyes behind such a cold mask.\"
That line really hit me.
Wrfulrfully well written and engaging... I want a chess set like that ;) Sadly, my motionless pieces have nothing so interesting as a sex life of their own. I\'ll have to make do with reading about Albus\'. Do post again soon! I very much look forward to the next update.
-Crooked
That line really hit me.
Wrfulrfully well written and engaging... I want a chess set like that ;) Sadly, my motionless pieces have nothing so interesting as a sex life of their own. I\'ll have to make do with reading about Albus\'. Do post again soon! I very much look forward to the next update.
-Crooked
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! Thank you ever so much for this update. Brilliant job, especially the backstory being worked into the present mental musings so believably. Great sex scene, wonderful cliff-hanging ending, I\'m looking forward to more. Happy holidays!
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, wow, wow. Not only was that almost as amazing for me as it probably was for them, but you are so damn talented! I have benn waiting for this for some time and I feel very much like Severus, it was very much worth the wait. wow wow wow.
Barrie
Barrie
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous. Lovely proseeat eat invention, tender and complicated and adult emotions--I\'m enjoying this so much! Thank you for sharing it with us.
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more, please!
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapter 3, I\'ve missed this story & am so glad that you got some time so you could update it!!! I LOVE this chapter!!! I am so glad that they realized their mutual feelings & I hope that they will be able to have more time to explore each other the next time!!!
Til Chapter 4, Deb >^..^<
Til Chapter 4, Deb >^..^<
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy when I got your e-mail on WIKTT saying you updated. I love all of your stories. I\'ve only been reading fanfiction for a little while, but I\'ve read Soul Searching and the Gift Horse over and over. I can tell Last Minute Crisis will be the same. Your character development is fantastic, and the dialogue is never stilted or awkward. I love how the issue is with Severus\' virgin blood. Usually in the stories it\'s Hermione\'s virgin blood that is going to be used in some way. I love it. And a virgin Snape makes me want to do the same thing Hermione did...