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by Lupusdragon1

schedule December 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is sweet and kinds hot. I love it that harry embraced his dual personality.
person HentaiZaru
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW! I LOVE this!
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your phrasing is beautiful. I went back and read some of it aloud for the sheer joy of hearing it. Wonderful story- another fresh and meaty plot. You really are making me despise Ron Weasley. It is a good thing. I\'m alternately indifferent to or just plain annoyed by canon Ron. It is a testament to your ability that I believe and prefer your version of him. I would marry you if I didn\'t like you so much.
person ravenpan
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was exquisite!
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I hope they lived happily ever after! And Ron sleeps in the garbage. *growl* Poor Harry! Thank goodness for Draco and Severus!
person Lynn
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Such a lovely story. You have done a great job, and I can not wait to see new chapters. ^_^
person Christina
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! It's so wondeful! I love it! You have to update .. I will keep my eye out.. I can't wait to read more.
person DeathDragon
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. Just fantastic. Your vocabulary is refreshingly elaborate and your style is enrapturing. It's also nice to see the more submissive, wanting side of Harry and the protective, dominant side of Draco. I've read and abandoned too many fics that had Draco, simply, as a slut and Harry as a lustful, inhumane being. Your fic keeps the traits that makes these characters so intriguing, and yet places them with new feelings that simply aren't present in the books. Frankly, I love it. It's phenomenal. Please, keep up the good work.
person sak
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very positive ending to a chapter with such a withdrawn Harry. Playing up the House rivalry to the point that people consider it a betrayal for Harry to find comfort where he can was an interesting turn. That was quite narrow minded of his housemates. I would be hurt if my friend turned to someone else, but I'd like to think I'd understand as well. I look forward to more.
person Jesonte
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bonjour! Mon dieu, did I love this fic...Bleh, I don't like Ron's character (in the book and movie), so I was happy he was expelled and is now wandless. I hope you can continue with this fic; good luck writing the next chapter. ~Au Revoir~