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January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would fully you encourage you to continue this work.
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December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lazy Elf is just that then, a lazy elf. Cme on, you gotta continue. This is getting good. You have every right to carry on. If Elfie kid don\'t like it, tell them to write a different version or a different story. It\'s upto u. Hope to see another chapter.
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please please please continue. This story does not suck. I think it\'s great. I love Snape/Harry pairings. I\'m also quite fond of Sirius/Harry and Lucius/Harry. Please go on with the story.
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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, don\'t beat yourselves up. I\'ve read really,really bad stories by those who claim english as their first language. Maybe you can get someone to proof your stories for grammar, otherwise the story is absolutely fine. and I would like to see where you go with it. If you don\'t know someone who can proof your material, mail me and I\'ll see what I can do. Don\'t give up just because of the language!!! Keep on writing!
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It doesn\'t suck! Actually, I\'m really liking it so far. Nothing to improve upon that I can see to criticize. I love the deep thoughts and the characters are well done ... Do More!!!!!!
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This sounds promising....
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, we know the prologue was short but the next chapter is a lot longer and gets to business. We promise that.
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September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
While the prolog was short, the summary sounds promising. Can\'t wait to read more.
Update soon.
Update soon.