rate_review Reviews

A very good story although there was the occasional grammar/spelling error. And please don't apologize for putting characters through the ringer; that's what frequently brings about character development.

Woah. Okay, this has to be one of the most sweetest and brilliant HP/SS fics I have ever read! It\'s taken me hours of scouring through the HP archive to find fics such as this, and this is one of the only good ones I\'ve found! So many fics and writers and... this is a brilliant gem in a dark, dank mountain. I must say that Severus is most DEFINATELY my favourite character in the Potterverse, and Ron is alne one of my top four (Which also consist of, yes, Severus, Remus and Sirius) and although seeing Ron protrayed as such an... anal-retentive prat, I can understand and appreciate the characterisation you have given him. Keep up the good work, I have really enjoyed spending the afternoon reading this. And if you feel a sequal coming on, I am NOT going to stop you. I think I\'ll be dreming about this fic tonight...

That was good. Could use a little spell check in the last bit, but I enjoyed it quite a bit.