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April, you never cease to amuse me. Yet another great chapter. I can\'t wait to see what happens in Vegas!

Wow.
Just ... wow.

That was a tough chapter. Very difficult to read - must have been hell to write.

Powerful stuff, girlfriend!

*grovels before your brilliance*

I can\'t wait to see them in Vegas. I love the tortured, self-depricating Severus you\'ve created here. He\'s sad and sweet and funny and awful all at once.

Bravo! I love this story so far! I am eagerly awaiting future chapters from you! Keep up the good work please!!!!!

Imagine my pleasant surprise after being away from my computer for a few days...coming back and finding two more chapters! I love this story...I hope he tells her he wants her to stay...how could she resist? I know I couldn\'t! Thank you for the good read & steamy sex scenes!

I think this is such a delightful tale and would be grateful if you\'d continue.....;)

Great chapter! Don\'t know what to say, really... I always comment about the funny parts... Don\'t take it as if it\'s something wrong with the rest of the story... It\'s only that I can relate too much with the depression thing to make comments of that without being too personal. You are portraying the feelings of a very depressed person so well that I\'m shocked.
So going to the funny part before I start rambling... Albus\'s marrige in Vegas? And he want Severus and Hermione there? (may I say that\'s not a good place to be for a depressed person and his savior? that could lead to a marrige not so wanted... well, maybe wanted but without thinking about it...). I need to read about it! Please update soon!!

You\'re mad. This whole story is mad. I\'m enjoying it, though. :)

April,

I\'ve really been enjoying the twists and turns of I, Snape. The exposure of the Potions-hating Potions Master in this chapter is a fascinating challenge to my suspension of disbelief.
I\'m a bit concerned, though, with the burden placed on Miss Granger to direct his life as well as her own. Wasn\'t she casting about for a direction \'weeks\' earlier? And, if \'saving Severus\' becomes her new hobby, wouldn\'t she eventually become dissatisfied with dragging him around behind her? (Incidentally, if you want help writing this last idea - let me know.)
I really hope that Severus will get his act together and become capable again - for I don\'t forsee Hermione being able to maintain respect for him as a person on the basis of sex alone. However, prove me wrong in a believable fashion, and you\'ll REALLY have a sex farce!

Thanks for writing - looking forward to the next installment!
Seraphim

Well, I said it on LJ and I\'ll say it again: wonderful, fantastic, mind-blowing. This story just gets better and better with each chapter ... it\'s still a comedy, but with so many layers! Fabulous!