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What an incredible ride, April. I have got to admit I am glad Albus has a spell to tighten his body up a bit - shallow, I know ;-)
I know it is a farce, and very funny, but I do feel so sorry for Snape at times, and I feel you have mixed just the right blend of pathos in with the humour. Not to mention your wickedly enjoyable erotic scenes.

I too have joined NaNoWriMo, and I will be keeping up wit oth other projects. So no excuses will be accepted; keep updating. Who needs sleep anyway?

Go, Aprilgrey! Go, Aprilgrey! Go, Aprilgrey! Please finish! I love the self=help book! And this is the funniest messed up Snape I\'ve ever read! All the best -- Sam

What an entertainingly dysfunctional relationship they have! Great, as always.

I just wanted to drop a quick note to let you know that I really enjoyed this chapter, especially your description of the Knight Plane. Dentists chairs and Captain Krashenburn. What a wonderful imagination! Keep up the good work and good luck with Nano.

~Jules

Another great chapter. Good luck with the NaNo Month thing. I haven\'t decided yet if i am going to participate.. I guess I still have until I wake up in the monring to decide though... hmmm.

Marvelous work.Poor Sev keeps surprising me!! I love it.He\'s very different than most stories show him but still retains the vulnerability that we love.

There are few things more decadently erotic that sex in a tub/spa/pool. Nice to see you included that setting. Oh, are we going to see a Las Vegas wedding...besides Dumbledore\'s? And when is the deivine Miss Granger going to go down on Severus while he sees the sight of her head bobbing up and down on him? And just what is Severus going to do to rectify the fact that Hermione can\'t get a decent job in the wizarding world? Potion\'s apprentice/assistant? So many possibilities, so many places to take this story? AND WHAT ABOUT CONTRACEPTION? Is Severus going to knock her up? Has she been taking something for years that serves as one, like the Muggle \"Pill\"? Or is he sterile?

As always, a very enjoyable chapter...keep those chapters coming.

Another great chapter. Really interesting...
Next chapter would be Vegas and Albus\' wedding? Well at least Vegas? I\'m dying to know what Severus would say about his mother marring the Headmaster. Update soon!

Simply lovely. The emotional flares and up and downs of poor Sev tugged at my heart while the lemons quickened the fever I already have. This has been the most interesting, captivating story I have read in the last several months and though I know it is a farce I cannot help but want it to take a more settled, smutty or perhaps solid venue. But DONT. Looking forward to the next installment.