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for I, Snape

by Avrild

person Rilla
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope he gets to keep her! I don\'t know why I feel such sympathy for your Snape, but I do. I just love him. :)
person nesscafe
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is coming along so wonderfully! I am so glad that Sev has made a decision to try and \"keep\" Hermione. Poor thing, he doesn\'t realize that she\'s more then willing to stay! Goof ball! She keeps coming back! But he needs to do some serious ass kissing to make up for all his screw ups so far! Can\'t wait to see what goes on next!
person Elizabeth Stump
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved the part about Snape running into Goyle. A nice way for Snape to regain a little self worth and hunker down and face life with some renewal. Great to see Snape realize he MUST HAVE HER. Interesting he came to that conclusion after coming in his dream - him not able to have her and *have* her in the shower. I smell a double wedding coming up. Interesting to see how Bladderwort will figure into this. I see a wizards duel - jealous Snape faces off with an oily/charming Bladderwort trying to ger Hermione drunk on watered down casino drinks. I wonder if Hermione will pass for 21 to go gambling or get something alcoholic.

Keep those wonderful chapters coming!

P.S. Hope you don\'t catch crap for the shampoo bottle incident. I don\'t mind one bit, at least it paints a realistic pitcure of a man\'s imagination...my husband would vouch for that.
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m hoping the shampoo bottle was one of those hotel size ones, because otherwise, OW!.

schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
I really like your idea to put a psychiatrist to help Hermione. I don\'t know much about Jung\'s ideas, or how a wizard can use them, but I like that Hermione has someone to talk about... someone to ask help...

BTW, congrats, your story has more than 200 reviews!
person Jenny
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As ever, this is peculiar, insane, weird - and extremely interesting.
person AlphaRyoko
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD!

Snape telling Hermione that Harry used the \"oldest line in the book\"?!?!?

This from the guy who\'s tried to kill himself in her presence twice?!?!

Priceless! Just ... priceless.

***still giggling uncontrollably***
person Elizabeth Stump
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh, now it\'s getting even more interesting. I wonder if Snape is going to adopt some cooler clothing for the desert heat. Will they catch a show? (Herione dragging him there, of course.) Bladderwort could make for some good jealousy situations. Love the plane sex! Will Snape have a gambling problem or is he too cynical? The self help book is a nice addition to the story. I smell a set up...Albus and Althea asking Hermione and Severus to be witnesses at their wedding. Such a fun read and the smut is now bucketing down...Hallelueah!
person Karen
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
person amethyst
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you are progresssing witis sis story. I am going to hate to see it end too. Sorry if I haven\'t reviewed as often as I should, been real busy and trying to read as much as I can so not taking the time to review.