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for I, Snape

by Avrild

person Rilla
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness! Dumbledore telling them to get a room - that is priceless. I can\'t wait to see their reactions to each other...especially when Snape sees him mom!
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and although I have said it before....I wish you\'d write more and sooner. :)
person amethyst
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I may have said this before, but I think this may have been the best chapter of the story. I really like the tension in it and can\'t wait to find out everyone\'s reaction at being caught! If for some reason, I forget to review the next chapter when it comes it please know that it is because I am very busy at the moment, heading into the home stretch of this semester. I will keep reading faithfully though.
person Elizabeth Stump
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Every grerat fic has to have a little Karaoke...okay, maybe not. LOVED the ending of this chapter with a half naked Albus and a scantily clad Althea peering in evereverus and Hermione doing the vertical bump and grind in the hallway. Oh, I wonder what Severus will say after seeing his mother in a state of undress with his Headmaster/Mentor/Employer.

Nice thau gou got rid of the Bladderworts. What an annoying lot. Even better that Severus apologized for being a stupid git and got Hermione back. Was hoping they\'d get back to more sex soon. Can\'t wait to read Severus\' reaction to the fact his mother is getting married. That should be rich. Again, another excellent, fun read. Bravo. Major chuckles in this corner of the world as I read this.

P.S. I highly recommend an epilogue...PLEEEEEAAASSE.
person LilyMalfoy
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
April! This was brilliant. I o sao sad that its nearing the end, but I\'m looking forward to it too! I can\'t wai see see what happens.
person ShagsTheDustmop
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned that I love this story? Ok, well have I mentioned it today?
I LOVE THIS STORY!
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
A little sad to hear that the story is coming closer to the end... and at the same time eager to know how it ends... (you know, the normal feelings when reading a great story and you know iout out to end)

So, keep writing and update soon!
person Andrian
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapters as alwaprilpril! Glad Sev finally got to realize his feelings of needing retribution. Good luck with NaNo
person Leah
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dumbledore on a Vespa!? april, you slay me. such amusing mental images. :)
person amethyst
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyedthis chapter and look forward to the next one. I wish th cou could leave a better review, but this is my day from hell and I am nearly braindeadnow.