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for I, Snape

by Avrild

person AlphaRyoko
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It\'s asshole!Dumbledore! (forgive my language ... but, Wow!) Never tht tht that he\'d take such glee in kicking Severus when he\'s down. Hmmm ...
person Raven
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh No.... what an end to that, the poor guy, I\'m wibbling for snape now.

he seems so pathetic and wibbly..

what ever will Hermione say, oh the wibblyness of it all..

person Raven
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh No.... what an end to that, the poor guy, I\'m wibbling for snape now.

he seems so pathetic and wibbly..

what ever will Hermione say, oh the wibblyness of it all..

person Anon
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WELL THE CHAPTER WAS GREAT BUT HERMIONE RUNNING AWAY LIKE THAT REALLY BITES
person nesscafe
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EEEEK!!! You updated twice! How did I miss that other chapter! Oh well! It was like Christmas came early! I am so sad for poor Snape! I was hoping that things between him and Hermione were better after that last chapter, but then he asks for her hand and she bolts like the International House of Pancakes is on fire! Poor miserable man. Although I can\'t say I blame Mione\'. Things were moving so fast and Snape isn\'t exactly the easiest person to read. Oh I do hope there will be happiness in the future for these love birds! I eagerly await the next installment! Keep up the great writing!
person Peeves
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Grrrr...Sevie makes me wanna grab him by the neck and shake him like a rag doll!! LOL You are doing a wonderful job on the story hun, keep at it.

(hugs)
Peeves
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Great chapter!
He proposed to her. WOW! I was in shock. Poor thing... she ran away... and he was forced to be at Albus command... if he doesn\'t kill himself now I would say that he\'s almost cure ;) Please, update soon! I want to know what happens next...
person Raven
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story, it will be sad to see it end, but it\'s been a very great read, well the three times that I\'ve read it from the start while waiting for updates.. would you call this obessed or just plain weird lol

person Andrian
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am one of lost words today, so I will just say...more please? With puppy dog eyes. :)
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yet another great chapter (they whole story is great)!
I like the way you ended the chapter... I can\'t wait \'till next to know what will happen when they come out of the shock of seen each others in that situations ;)
Keep writing and updating!