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I\'m glad to see that NanoWrimo d sto stop you completing this, and it\'s also good to see you stay away from the usual plot devices and write something more interesting a more psychologically real.

like the mrs norris touch at the end as well!

I am truly enjoying this story. My laptop almost bounced off my belly when I read \"His chest hair frightened her...\" Still chuckling over it! LOL!! Keep writing : )

It was wonderful as I expected it would be and I loved the epilogue with Mrs. Norris. Watch out, Hermione, you have competition! LOL! Seriously though, it was a great read and thanks for sharing it with us.

~Jules

Ahh, the end of another great HG/SS fanfic. All great things mujst come to an end. Interesting that it didn\'t seem Hermione had to put an Imperio of him to get him into therapy. he he STILL resents Albus for banging his mother, even though they are married. At least Hermione eventually agreed to marry him the second time he asked.

I\'d like a sequel with the wedding and babies. Please, please, pretty please with Severus on top? I would love to see your version of their wedding. (Snicker!) Visions of Althea pregnant with her second child 8 months pregnant waddling down the isle as mother of the bride, Severus\' half brother toddling down the isle as ring bearer then crying from stage fright, Ron making a scene drunk off his arse, Hermione\'s muggle family asking for a \'magicw\',w\', Hermione getting knocked up and getting horrendous morning sickness, the return of her sex drive with a vengence, complaining and bitching, eating like there\'s no tomorrow, unusual food requests, waddling, and other joys of pregnancy. Severus observing the birth and just about passing out (LMAO!). So many possibilities. A sequel must be promised to us. PLEASE!

Oh, oh. I\'m sitting here gasping like a fish out of water. This is so ... so... oh I don\'t know. I realise that this is a farcical story, but really you are doing a fabulous job. I just sat through and read the whole thing when I should really be in bed asleep. I was supposed to be updating a story and got wampoled up in this from my WIKTT mailing list. I eagerly await your next efforts with bated breath. Not held, mind you, because real life has a tendancy to interfere in updates, at least for me.
Cheer\'s
Joy

Are you sure you are not English, April? You mix pathos and humour as I thought only the English could. The wedding chapel was as hilarious as the lovemaking was beautiful and sad. You are cruel with your cliffhangers, too. ;) Thanks for a brilliant chapter.

*shakes head* Peter Wigglesbotham *still shaking head* April... have I mentioned how much I LOVE this story? Well, in case I haven\'t... I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. There are just so many plot twists. I cannot wait until the next chapter. Keep up with the NaNo writing too!

ooh, I do hope she will eventually say yes! If she won\'t I will! Keep up the good work!

The wedding...what a riot!!! Vinyl mini with go-go boots? Excuse me while I throw up my shoes. Man, can you nail tacky or what? BLECH! It made me cringe and laugh at the same time. And the limo? Shudder... And going off to IHOP - GROAN!!! I\'m suprised you didn\'t have Dumbledore order the \"Rooty-Tutti Fresh and Fruity\". Do we American know the depth of our own tackiness? Not until we are faced with it so brutally. Bravo!

Loved how Hermione runs off and Albus/Althea keep Severus around unable to follow her. Oh, how will Severus woo Hermione back? Oh, waiting with baited breath to see how this wraps up. Another wonderful chapter, don\'t make us wait too long for the next.

Been reading right along stilstill loving it! Please write more!