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It was one of the most twisted,wicked and endlessly funny chapters I`ve ever read,obviously with tears in my eyes and almost wet pants as well!You should warn your readers they would wear diapers to avoid the utter catastrophe(especially if,like me, read your fic in the public Internet-cafe)!Usually the Snape fics and author of them are predictable what way they lead plots and action,yet in the case of your fic-I`m really incapable to imagine what new surprise and twist of action could you create and you have my highly appreciation because of this fact.

*giggles* Now THAT I was not expecting :) But it was quite funny!

Well Chapter 6 was not at all what I expected, but I loved it. I wasn\'t sure whether the spell had affected an alternate universe or if it had been a dream. Glad to see the path you chose, or the path that chose you. Anywho, it was entirely amusing, especially the image of Snape on a leash.

Wonderful Chapter, April. Love the interaction between Snape and Trelawney. Perfect mix of emotions and snark.

Fantastic! I loved his dream sequence. Just the thought of Snape dreaming in B-movie mode reatreat. I think you pulled it off beautifully. And McGonagall and Sprout as lovers is great.

Dumbledore and Snape\'s mother!!! hysterical! still, nicely written, though i\'m a bit too squicked to finish the chapter. i will, however, definitely finish the fic. BTW, hope your arm feels better.

April! Again i say, for lack of a better term, you friggin\' rock my socks! Even though you have now used this story to squick me out TWO successive times, i thank you for being such a... daring writer. I actually cried, I laughed so hard. You truly are the queen of imagination. Somewhere in England the great lady Rowling herself is frantically searching for your phone number. So thank you for the stories, and please don\'t ever stop writing. You\'ll be on bookshelves someday, count on it.

Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. April, you have outdone yourself with this story. It\'s funny and erotic and you channel Snape better than Trelawney channels anyone. A dry, cutting humor, moments of self-pity, overwhelming bitterness. And the scenes between him and Hooch and him and Trelawney are fantastic. Highly scintillating with a magnificent dose of comedy to them. This has been an absolute pleasure to read.

I don\'t often come out to aff.net unless specifically directed by a recommendation or a notification by an author I admire. Such is the case here. That being said, I sincerely hope you will notify us on the list of VVII when you next update this wonderful fiction.

Regards,

white raven

The Hogwart\'s Express, eh? I am greatly enjoying the story. I think that your characterisation of Snape in this is brilliant. I love the fact that he drinks Fresca! And I love that Trelawny is not the ugly duckly she is in the books. It\'s going to be interesting to see what comes of everyone else\'s plans for Severus. Is he going to be visited by all three women that evening. And how will he react to the e ane and McGonagall situations? Oooh I just can\'t wait.

This just keeps getting better. You had me laughing so hard with Snape\'s dry humor that I woke my husband up (and he was sleeping down the hall!). I can\'t wait for more!