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for I, Snape

by Avrild

schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::whimpers for poor Severus::

I must admit, however, I\'m clueless as to Madam Pince\'s rather exreme reaction. Yeah, if I was her I\'d be embarrassed as all hell, and feeling guilty as get out, but ordering him out? I don\'t get it. LOL I am enjoying htis story though, and hope to figure out why she reacted that way. : )

Kiri
person shemhamforash
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ye God\'s woman... what are you doing to the poor man!!! It\'s so damn good though you simply mus it it again!

Shemhamforashxxx
person Rilla
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This just gets better and better. me Pme Pince as a dominatrix! I love it. And I think \"needle-nosed harpy\" is my new favorite saying.
person Andrian
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my poor Snape...tis clever and funny still...continue
person nesscafe
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh!!! That little plan didn\'t work out as planned! Ooops! Can\'t wait to see what happens next!
person amethyst
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter. I was in one of those weird moods where I didn\'t feel like reviewing anything. It was a wonderful chapter. I had to read it twice. This one is great, too. I look forward to finding out how he discovers Hermione set him up and how she turns him into a cat.
person Lily Malfoy
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Each chapter gets more and more interesting. Keep up the great work. If there were any spelling errors/typos I did not notice them. What is it with Librarians always being into BDSM? I swear it is in so many stories, and I\'m not talking just those in the HP fandom.
person Laerai
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sad for Irma, and for Severus too. Though I think she is more devastated than he!
person Dame Niamh
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome - what can I say that other reviewers haven\'t gone on about? Absolutely delicious!

Blessings,
Dame Niamh, who laughed so hard her knickers suffered
person OzRatbag2
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I got the schlock B grade movie idea and it\'s certainly a departure from your other stories. It\'s a bit of a shock to open up the chapter and be bombarded with it, to be honest.

I think I\'ll have to go back and re-read this chapter and I must admit, I did suddenly realise that it must be a dream sequence at some point in the first third of the chapter.

I don\'t think you\'ve made a boo boo with the idea. It\'s new, original and Snape in a tight, package enhancing space suit, is an idea that makes me smile - followed shortly thereafter, by extreme mirth. ;)

A vision of...\"beam me up, Scotty.\"... was my first impression and I was waiting for the \'killer tomato\' to descend.

All in all, it\'s a unique way to highlight a love potion gone wrong and it highlights the caveat that all the instructions are important, not just the ingredients.