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for I, Snape

by Avrild

person nesscafe
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a chapter! Snape is one haunted human being. Bless him! Heds Hds Hermione there to shake things up and care about him! It will no doubt drive him nuts, but it\'s for his own good! :cD
person GeekGoddess
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my god....Hermione cares for Snape.....I can\'t wait to see what happens next.....oh i love this story....I have laughed so hard and really enjoyed myself reading this....
person k.h.
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!NNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!-------O.k these chapters really have to start getting longer(maybe 2or 3 pages?)
person shemhamforash
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Empty castle...Locked empty caste...undersexed Potions Master (not counting the cat) and hormonal teen???..This just keeps on getting more and more delicious...

SOOO WANT MORE!!!!!

Shem
person Rilla
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I so, so, SO love the exchanges between Albus and Althea! And the flying Vespa! Poor Snape (I loved his realization about Mrs. Norris!). Not-so-poor Hermione, though, locked in the castle with him all to herself.
person AlphaRyoko
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhhh, this chapter was just WONDERFUL.

*sigh* poor Snape ... always so abused and misunderstood ...
Seems like every fanfic has him being a neat freak in private, but you did such a good job in portraying him as a slob that it\'s totally believable!

Hermione to the rescue!!!

Again, great job. Bravo!
person Talene
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\'Tis a pity that he story ended where it did. I also apologize for not finding this story sooner! This is such a great fic! Please continue to write on it!! Poor Prof. Snape.....how I love him. *sighs*
person LilyMalfoy
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as always. Eager to see how things develop from here
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!! LOL

I can *just* see Albus acting like a teenager. ::giggles:: and the shirt idea was cute. Al + Al. lolol

and Errrrrgggg Snape\'s rooms, that\'s *definitely* a new take on the potion\'s master. LOL I can understand him being embarrassed, and the b sic sick/she\'d hear, \"I fucked Mrs. Norris\" bit was hilarious -- even if it did make me feel a little sad for him. LOL

The Dobby and Hermione scene was heart wrenching!

Looking forward to the continuation of this story.


Kiri
person Elizabeth Stump
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Snape a pig? I certainly wasn\'t expecting THAT. Though it\'s nice to see a fic that portrays him other than fastidious and anal retentive in his habits (Spartan furnishings and such).

I love the description of the moldy plate of food. Too bad it didn\'t growl at Hermione when she walked by (LOL).

I really like to plot twist of why Snape doesn\'t want House Elves in his rooms. Adds some character depth to him. Even more of a dark, brooding, tortured soul we all want to shag senseless.

Please post updates to your story on the WIKTT board...PLEASE?