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for I, Snape

by Avrild

person Elizabeth Stump
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bittersweet, touching, an acurate depiction of two horny teenagers and a nice dose of angst. As much as I love the humor of this fic, you have brought it back down to the ground with this chapter and have given Snape a soul (that I just want to shag senseless out of compassion and lust).

But you must lighten the mood soon with some more humor. Still love this chapter despite it being short (I WANT MORE!!!). Keep those chapters coming.
person nesscafe
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, now that was definately interesting! So far he has shagged everyone but Minoe! When does she get a peice of the action!? Just teasing... Sort of... Update soon!
person shemhamforash
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, quite a little change in direction...very nice indeed...Ahhh yes...the eternally tormenting question...How to gid oid of Miss Granger?...Quite sure I could come up with some interesting ideas...I am sure Sev\'s will be much, MUCH more delicious though

Waiting patiently (as I can) to see how well he is in achieveing this *smirk*

Well done

Shem xxx
person Rilla
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh! That was so heartwrenching, yet slightly disturbing (the fact that it took place during the Planet of the Catwomen anyway!). I can\'t wait to see the next chapter!!
person Jenny
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That\'s very obtuse of Hermione! I hope she cottons on to what\'s bothering her quickly!!

Damn good chapter, April.
person Andrian
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Sorry havent been up to par catching up but at least I have 2 lovely chapters to read at once. Lily and Sev hmmmm ...well I always suspected. I loved the description of Sevs rooms. i have known people like this...and often time they are very intellectual, creative being, not lazy, not slovenly but living in their own plane where chaos is more comforting that order. (I speak from some experience,,,,oh wait...I am just lazy never mind) Your story is brilliant.
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My heart goes out to him....always has and always will I suppose. He deserves love and I am hoping you will not leave him \'high and dry\' as the saying goes. Please keep writing!
person amethyst
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I do believe that you love to torment us! This chapter was a great surprise from what I was expecting. It was also a great way for us to understand Severus better. Anxiously awaiting the next.
person Maddy-Riddle
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Great work! I love the story.
But Hermione could not leave... not with a suicidal Snape alone for two weeks.
Keep writing... update soon!
person Elizabeth Stump
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10: You left me hanging. What is that \'something\'! Man, you almost had me when she realized that he was naked, too.
I thought, \"HERE IT COMES!!!\", but noooooo. Damn, you\'re a tease.

Can Hermione even get down to Hogsmeade for the train or will she be stuck there because the wards won\'t let her through? Does seem like
something Dumbledore would do. (SNICKER)

Thank Merlin you\'re popping out chapters fast enough for my liking or I\'d be climbing the walls.

Will Hermione be having any *interesting* dreams soon? How about Severus dreaming about being in cat form buring his head
in warm Granger breasts, now that he\'s seen them in human form. Will Hermione now try to seduce him if she can\'t leave Hogwarts?

Waiting, dying, anxious to read what comes next as always. :-)